~Voice on the Wind

I hear your voice calling through the meadows

         high above the mountain tops as it beckons 

it's elusive yet a clear reminder of all that is sacred

           that has gone before this time and ever shall be

crisp as a bell it echoes the chant of the ages

      winding through sorrow'd winds to be healed,

dances on ether'd clouds like spiritual autumn leaves

     floating gallantly on the wings of all mankind

bringing forth stillness and peace for all who listen 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"spiritual autumn leaves" Interesting phrase, Frieda... Whoosh, I love listening to the voice on the wind. :) Hmm, just wondering if you really mean "on the wind" or "in the wind" or "of the wind"? I find prepositions confusing and this is the first time I've read of "on the wind"...

[Frieda P]

Actually I borrowed it from the music that's playing, first line is "I hear your voice on the wind" I rather liked how it sounded, thanks Blue.

[Pryde Foltz]

Spectacular write, Frieda. I was blown away, here. You are so masterful.

[Frieda P]

Thanks, I'm blown away by your review Pryde.

[Baby Ricochet]

This is kinda nice. Peace would be a beautiful thing

[Frieda P]

Kinda thank you Baby ;-)

[Mark]

A vision of the divine. I enjoyed this one. :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Mark :-)

[writing mojo]

a nice ring to the eventful depth you spring from..great piece that is so shuttled yet arrives you vindicated in a gusty dream then whispered in an invisible intent..i am moved

[Frieda P]

Always extremely happy when someone is moved, thanks mojo.

[Debbie_Philly]

Gorgeous... I love your poetry... its so soothing and so much beauty in your word.... loved this !! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Debbie, jazzed you enjoyed. :-)

[Firestone Feinberg]

Frieda this is magnificent. It is a prayer. Very very special. Exhilarating really! l,d

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Dave, I'm so glad you felt that. x

[Vani Jalagar]

hear your voice calling through the meadows
high above the mountain tops as it beckons......
cute lines.......I hear it breaths...echoed and reverberated:)
splendid :)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Vani, jazzed you enjoyed :-)

[wordwarrior]

The imagery in this Frieda is really stunning, quite the most gorgeous poem, delicate and haunting.

[Frieda P]

Thanks wordwarrior, glad you enjoyed this one...

[David Scott]

Many hear and few listen...
Many feel but few are touched...
Many speak and seldom are the words found worthy to be carried on the winds.
Your poetry will surely be echoing in the crisp autumn air.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your sweet review Scott....

[N!LoC]

nice picture.. nice song... nice poem....

[Frieda P]

Thanks N............