~Few Fairy Tales Ago...

I should caution you dear sir

my spaces are sealed vault tight

too much heartache all for naught

lay me down on a bed of roses ~

don't expect me to die for you

rush my senses with intensity

my body will respond in kind

don't expect the same in return, 

from my emotions nor my mind~

both expired a few fairy tales ago

Author's Note

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Reviews

[annie lee]

Yes, the acres of debris left by insidious fairy tales fracturing our lives and futures. Poor Walt -- I don't think he meant to turn several generations of little girls into breathless Snow Whites waiting for Prince Charming -- but perhaps it was the naivete of the times we grew up in: the ubiquitous TV filling our heads with visions of Ozzie and Harriet type couples, Ward and Betty Cleaver, Dobie Gillis suffering for his beloved blond cheerleader from afar. Oh well, better to have our eyes open walking through this meadow; you can spot the fairy crap before you step in it.

[Frieda P]

Haha you're too funny lady....a fairy crap detector sounds like a good idea though.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This is an awesome piece. I always find myself attracted to those who are broken in some kind of way, not sure why, this spoke to me as if coming from a familiar voice.

[Cassie]

from my emotions nor my mind~ both expired a few fairy tales ago" those are my best lines. I loved this one Frieda. Hugs

[kublakhan27]

Sounds like Mrs.Robinson came out to play haha...of course, she plays by her own rules ;) Definitely one of your more clever works, but the message is loud and clear. I have no interest in being Prince Charming, but I'd sure as hell like to be Prince Charisma at times...Great work love :)

[Tom]

Sometimes a good chat and a laugh are all that's required !

A most gentle, intimate poetic muse Frieda !

[Vani Jalagar]

lay me down on a bed of roses ~
don't expect me to die for you
:) sounds like a reloaded attitude........nice lines

[s y e]

"too much heartache all for naught
lay me down on a bed of roses ~"

-- A lovely write here Frifri - a fairy tale of love?

I loved this one, one of my favourites tonight.

[ANTO]

The fairy tales, as kids they enchant then they beckon in youth, then they disappoint us then they finally jade. And yet we are so hard-wired to believe that the next generation has to learn the hard way too.
Hah - profiler - brilliant Frieda !!

[Frieda P]

Yeah, screw the next generation, why should they have it esasy...ha, we should ban all Walt Diseny movies so...those captchas freak me out sometimes! Thanks ANTnee.!

[ANTO]

Laughing here
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[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

This is lovely! This speaks so much about what I feel nowadays. "from my emotions nor my mind both expired a few fairy tales ago" sums it all in excellent accuracy. :)

Anyway, what a wonderful song you have here. I'm quite disturbed by the images though. Haha.

[Frieda P]

I hear you on all counts...ha, I know very freaky video, I guess love is supposed to make you whole or something like that. ;-)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

That's my interpretation, too. :)

[Frieda P]

I'd settle for a piece of Adrian Brody lol ;-)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Hahaha how about a fingernail? ;)

[OTownPete]

Reciprocation will not be forthcoming, under any circustances. Not jaded just weary. Your friend in words, Pete

[Frieda P]

Me or you Pete..........?

[OTownPete]

That's just what I got from this piece Frieda

[Frieda P]

Yes I know, I was just kidding with you.

[Latifa]

i like it it as a nice ring to it and deep meaning good job

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your visit & review Latifa, much appreciated.