Dances On A Cloud

Dances On A Cloud

A Poem by Frieda P

My soul 
has purged 
a thousand lives

I have traveled,
 many destinations

I found my peace
 and contentment
within my heart
floating through air

no matter 
how wide my longing
it drifts ardently,
captivated

amidst this reverie's mystery, 
holds tight onto a cloud

coming full circle
it always takes me back
to this sacred place
dancing on the midnight skies


© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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'.. I found my peace ~ and contentment ~ within my heart ~ floating through air.. ' .. beautiful.
Echoed by Celtic Woman, great choice.

Your words inevitably touch the heart and/or mind, dear friend. You find your own places in life and so often introduce the rest of us to either peace and contentment or humour and contentment.. either way, you create miracles as well as lovely poetry. Thank you, yet again.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille sweet petulia, muchly appreciate your sentiments here my friend. xo



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Beautiful presentation Frieda...enjoyed reading and listening to the music too...Rose:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful. It has such a sweet tenor to it, even though it seems to be laced with a little bit of melancholy. One I can completely relate to.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is absolutely beautiful. This poem literally had me holding my breath the second time I read it because the first time it took that breath away. Your wrods are like music flowing from the screen, and even though when you do have music I can't hear it, I can hear this one because it is singing sweetly to me. Amazing again.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dreamy and magical poetry, Frieda. A mystical sort of feeling to this one. I liked it a lot. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


very moving piece, Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Another delicate, ethereal piece that feels like your bond to Lee?

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Tags: Dancing, clouds, flying, soul, peace, mystery

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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