Dances On A Cloud

My soul 

has purged 

a thousand lives

I have traveled,

 many destinations

I found my peace

 and contentment

within my heart

floating through air

no matter 

how wide my longing

it drifts ardently,

captivated

amidst this reverie's mystery, 

holds tight onto a cloud

coming full circle

it always takes me back

to this sacred place

dancing on the midnight skies

Reviews

[emmajoy]

'.. I found my peace ~ and contentment ~ within my heart ~ floating through air.. ' .. beautiful.
Echoed by Celtic Woman, great choice.

Your words inevitably touch the heart and/or mind, dear friend. You find your own places in life and so often introduce the rest of us to either peace and contentment or humour and contentment.. either way, you create miracles as well as lovely poetry. Thank you, yet again.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille sweet petulia, muchly appreciate your sentiments here my friend. xo

[Adam Whitworth]

I'm glad you've found your peace and contentment

[Frieda P]

Thanks Adam.

[Art Sun]

some say we live continuously...well our Soul's do, and the Soul seeks home...continuously...nice work Freida....

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Art, jazzed you enjoyed.....

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love the loftiness of your verses, how they mesh so perfectly with the art form you've chosen. Such a lovely presentation, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Kelly, glad you enjoyed this one!

[Essa G]

Wow, you've really written a great poem, I can picture it in my head :)

[Frieda P]

Wow that's the best compliment a poet can get, thanks Essa! :-)

[MikeV]

My friend, you have explained cloud 9 ;)

[Michael G. Smith]

Traveling many destinations. You are an old soul. Living more life than most people your age(29). Mystical write.

[Misery]

Timeless words from an ancient soul flowing through a contemporary writer.
Frieda P, your well-spring is surely drought-proof.

[icelandicblue]

There is a mesmerizing serenity to this one. To fly in abject bliss and peace, who wouldn't want that. This is really a stunning piece of art.

[Emberlorna]

I can imagine a woman standing on a rocky cliff in Ireland with the wind blowing her hair, in a time long ago, reminiscing thoughts, staring off into the setting sun...I loved every line and the music is so lovely. It all flows so perfectly :}

[Sami Khalil]

I felt I was traveling on a magic carpet looking for the sacred place of love...Awesome...:)