Dances On A Cloud

My soul 

has purged 

a thousand lives

I have traveled,

 many destinations

I found my peace

 and contentment

within my heart

floating through air

no matter 

how wide my longing

it drifts ardently,

captivated

amidst this reverie's mystery, 

holds tight onto a cloud

coming full circle

it always takes me back

to this sacred place

dancing on the midnight skies

Reviews

[emmajoy]

'.. I found my peace ~ and contentment ~ within my heart ~ floating through air.. ' .. beautiful.
Echoed by Celtic Woman, great choice.

Your words inevitably touch the heart and/or mind, dear friend. You find your own places in life and so often introduce the rest of us to either peace and contentment or humour and contentment.. either way, you create miracles as well as lovely poetry. Thank you, yet again.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille sweet petulia, muchly appreciate your sentiments here my friend. xo

[Dye]

This is such a beautiful view.....dancing on midnight skies, feels like finding peace....very angelic.

[Frieda P]

Angelic, you meant the poem right? lol...thanks Dye!

[Dye]

Of course, I know you're no angel....unless there are little devil angels, then I mean you. lol

[Justaguy]

Little devil angels....what a visual...LMAO

[Frieda P]

I think they're called d'angels ;-)

[Justaguy]

I think they are called writers...LOL ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. It is wonderful if we can travel to sacred places and repeat the sweet dances. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks Coyote, jazzed you enjoyed.

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the layout..I am probably a rotten reviewer, and I tend to concentrate too much on the form, but it has to be right to get the message over, and this verse form fits very well the content !

[Frieda P]

Thanks Leslie, and far from it, enjoy your reviews, thanks so much!

[Firestone Feinberg]

Beautiful poem, Frieda. Thanks.

[Frieda P]

Oh so weird, I was just thinking of you my friend, thanks so much.

[Einstein Noodle]

ethereal....you shoot and come so close to the mark...you say it so well....that sacred place becomes the greatest part of us if we persevere. captivated and holding tight to clouds....great job of describing what color is..:) ohmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.
E.

[Frieda P]

Were you meditating here E? Thanks so much for your gracious review, carry on..... ;-)

[OTownPete]

It sounds very much like a pleasant experience Frieda. Your friend in words, Pete

[Frieda P]

Thanks Pete.

[KeeD]

This is celestial, I actually felt like it was an outer body read for me.. transcending nirvana.. It's awesome, would love to set camp at such a place for a majority of my life away from the hardships of reality.

[Frieda P]

I love your reviews Kee, thanks so much and me too. :-)

[wordwarrior]

Ahh how lovely Frieda. There are times when we really know our destiny and then other times it's a blur. o be sure of that one person whom we love is the icing on the proverbial cake.
Soft, delicate and elegant!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille wordwarrior, jazzed you enjoyed this one!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

'Tis a lovely view from the clouds, Friedalicious...I was floating upon one as I read this...

A dreamy piece...effervescent!! ...felt magical (Disney world magical)!!! :D

I enjoyed every line!~xoxo~

[Frieda P]

Awh Robbie, what a luverly thing to say, thanks so much! xox