Dances On A Cloud

My soul 

has purged 

a thousand lives

I have traveled,

 many destinations

I found my peace

 and contentment

within my heart

floating through air

no matter 

how wide my longing

it drifts ardently,

captivated

amidst this reverie's mystery, 

holds tight onto a cloud

coming full circle

it always takes me back

to this sacred place

dancing on the midnight skies

Reviews

[emmajoy]

'.. I found my peace ~ and contentment ~ within my heart ~ floating through air.. ' .. beautiful.
Echoed by Celtic Woman, great choice.

Your words inevitably touch the heart and/or mind, dear friend. You find your own places in life and so often introduce the rest of us to either peace and contentment or humour and contentment.. either way, you create miracles as well as lovely poetry. Thank you, yet again.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille sweet petulia, muchly appreciate your sentiments here my friend. xo

[s y e]

This is a very moving write but written really well. Loved the music too, very fitting.

Awesome job.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sye, glad you enjoyed.

[ms. barrie]

delicate, enlightening imagery, transcending one towards other magical realms of serenity.
gorgeous choice of words, your ink drops always flows as if their flower petals...
gliding upon water!
simply amazing. love the music as well
this is simply a breath-taking write, Frieda...thanks for sharing! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your gracious review Barrie, jazzed you enjoyed :-)

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, Frieda :)

[Tai Ryens]

Ah, the continuous cycle of life brought only to a halt by death; to have our atoms dance around in the nothingness of the universe and finding peace in it. I liked the concept of this, it's delicious food for thought.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tai, your reviews are food for thought as well....

[Ruth]

Sweet Goddess...this moved me, the song, holds memories for me and the poem, just perfect xx

[Frieda P]

Ah this music is definitely moving & inspirational , thanks so much Poppy xo

[prachi prangya agasti]

nice words.. great theme.. and pleasant.. i enjoyed it... well written... :)

[Frieda P]

So glad you did, thanks prachi :-)

[Pete Langley]

Happy-pill induced euphoria, sniffing too much ozone,....or someone is stroking your hair again, sweetness!....whatever makes that silly smile is doing you good, hun! P.

[Frieda P]

Ha sweet P...no happy pills here, I wish, the hair stroking sounds magnifique though! Thanks, you always make me smile luv. x

[Opeyemi Jide-Ojo]

You give peace in this poem. suddenly i fell very quiet inside. thanks...

[Frieda P]

What a gracious thing to say, thanks again.........!

[Opeyemi Jide-Ojo]

you're welcome... and i got inspired for a new piece i dedicated to you: "Dance with the night"

[Frieda P]

Wow, I'm so honored, thanks so much! :-)

[Opeyemi Jide-Ojo]

You're lovely.. all i can say is that.....

[Frieda P]

That's more than enough, I'll take it. :-)

[Ken Simm.]

A feeling of peace pervades this wonderful poem Frieda. And that makes me peaceful too.

[Frieda P]

Sweet to know Ken, thanks so much, means a lot coming from you. I think we were reading in unison...

[Tom]

Everyone has their own secret reclusive retreat to venture too, were they can seek solace to contemplate the musing of life in peace and this one sounds blissfully serene!

[Frieda P]

'Blissfully serene', I like that Tom, thanks so much my friend!