Dances On A Cloud

My soul 

has purged 

a thousand lives

I have traveled,

 many destinations

I found my peace

 and contentment

within my heart

floating through air

no matter 

how wide my longing

it drifts ardently,

captivated

amidst this reverie's mystery, 

holds tight onto a cloud

coming full circle

it always takes me back

to this sacred place

dancing on the midnight skies

Reviews

[emmajoy]

'.. I found my peace ~ and contentment ~ within my heart ~ floating through air.. ' .. beautiful.
Echoed by Celtic Woman, great choice.

Your words inevitably touch the heart and/or mind, dear friend. You find your own places in life and so often introduce the rest of us to either peace and contentment or humour and contentment.. either way, you create miracles as well as lovely poetry. Thank you, yet again.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille sweet petulia, muchly appreciate your sentiments here my friend. xo

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Frieda - I like the start of this verse & just goes from there...I do dislike the font...hehehe...but this has a self reflection in the perspective of things...and the music...I would love to see them in concert...I know you already read this part...a little change to the details of my busy life...may be others will give me a break in the RR's...Good to read your work…Thanks for the invite to read your thoughts to paper at Writers Café...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...I ‘m happy to say I have 102 copy writes to go…will be busy the next few months on other projects...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...for late next month release…I have very little time on my hands…making the most of everyday and taking today to read as many as I can…keep writing and sharing your creative talent here and elsewhere…

[Emily B]

perfection, so good to start my morning at the top of the sandpile :)

[Frieda P]

Ha try slipping onto a cloud Emily :-)

[annie lee]

This is really lovely. It has your usual lyricism but also a wonderful shape to it and a great feeling of continuity.

[Frieda P]

Thanks annie, glad you enjoyed.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I found my peace
and contentment
within my heart
floating through air

Ohh, heaven. :) Such a dreamy piece, Frieda. :)

[Frieda P]

Thank you Blue, glad you enjoyed this one, I love coming back just to listen to the calming music. :-)

[TL Boehm]

a soul at peace in the midst of chaos. That is beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tammy, the music so inspired that peace amid the chaos, jazzed you enjoyed.

[Stella Armour]

i think this is one of your best Frieda, it comes from your soul...and i like it very much...

[Frieda P]

You're so right Stella, glad you felt that my sweet friend. Thanks so much.

[MsJewel]

You have touched my heart with your graceful words and left me with a feeling of serenity. Your poem is lovely Frieda.

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Thrilled you felt that way, thanks so much Julie. :-)

[Rita L. Sev]

This piece is a slice of serenity, exactly what is needed at the end of a hectic week... Relaxing and uplifting at the same time. Very nice, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

See, I can do uplifting too, thanks Rita! ;-)

[Pryde Foltz]

We are but stardust momentarily bound. Beautiful, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Pryde, yes we are but stardust, glad you enjoyed.

[Angel]

Ahh, my sweet friend, you have outdone yourself with this exquisitely serene piece. This is absolutely lovely.
And your taste in music is positively divine!!
Altogether, this is magnificent!!
Gal, you are well on your way to earning those peacock feathers!!!
0;-D

[Frieda P]

Woo if I knew this was going to help get me my peacock wings I would have done it long ago, thanks Angel! ;-)