"Life IS a kaleidoscope..."

Inspired by another poet's words, thank you Chris.

"Life IS a kaleidoscope of uncontrolled moments cascading across our consciousness..."

As I stumbled about in your words 

   I knew you were onto something

    no wonder I'm always dizzy 

              and my mind in a tizzy

I sigh'd in the knowledge

      I'm not the only one that gets caught up,

in my thoughts being all jumbled & fractured

   it's the same difference

        no matter who you are

we're all twinkling stars

    in our own little universe

ever shifting in our perception 

     and altered pattern views

        wishing to connect

   on some deeper level within the bigger picture,

   the vivacity of colors in our world,

               that we so aptly call  *life*

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Frieda - The theme with this gives in the lines...descriptive and appealing...Good to read your work…Thanks for the invite to read your thoughts to paper at Writers Café...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...will be busy the next few months...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...for late next month release…I have very little time on my hands…making the most of everyday and taking today to read as many as I can…keep writing and sharing your creative talent here and elsewhere…

[Frieda P]

Thanks Glen, you're repeating yourself. :-)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...

[Essa G]

Wow, that''s a really deep poem! I love how you made it into something that gets somebody really thinking!

[Frieda P]

Jazzed you enjoyed Essa, thanks muchly!

[OTownPete]

Yep, I can readily relate on so many levels.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Pete.

[Justaguy]

Very nice! I wish I could put words together like you do with meaning.

[Frieda P]

Awh you're sweet guy....thanks muchly.

[Lydia Shutter]

What a concept! Poets as those colorful bits of paper inside the kaleidoscope....yes, and when we share our words, the pictures created are always a bit different. They are unpredictable and never boring, that's for sure. Brilliant! Loved this one. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Never boring Lydi, thanks so much.

[Chris]

Yes, you touched it ...exactly. Thanks Frieda.

[Frieda P]

I touched it, now what do I do with it is the question, you're welcome Chris, I should be thanking you...

[Chris]

you already did hon... you "listened"

[Jack...]

A kaleidoscope, different SHAPES and PATTERNS in varying colors and reflections. No wonder I liked this one. :) Indeed Frieda, life is a series of patterns and colors, all arranged in an abstract formation hoping that someday we will figure it all out. Not sure I will ever get there, but if I keep reading your poetry enough I will at least smile for the duration. Amazing again my friend.

[Frieda P]

Hey I did a shape's one too ;-) If you figure it out first, let me know, will ya?