"Life IS a kaleidoscope..."

Inspired by another poet's words, thank you Chris.

"Life IS a kaleidoscope of uncontrolled moments cascading across our consciousness..."

As I stumbled about in your words 

   I knew you were onto something

    no wonder I'm always dizzy 

              and my mind in a tizzy

I sigh'd in the knowledge

      I'm not the only one that gets caught up,

in my thoughts being all jumbled & fractured

   it's the same difference

        no matter who you are

we're all twinkling stars

    in our own little universe

ever shifting in our perception 

     and altered pattern views

        wishing to connect

   on some deeper level within the bigger picture,

   the vivacity of colors in our world,

               that we so aptly call  *life*

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Frieda - The theme with this gives in the lines...descriptive and appealing...Good to read your work…Thanks for the invite to read your thoughts to paper at Writers Café...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...will be busy the next few months...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...for late next month release…I have very little time on my hands…making the most of everyday and taking today to read as many as I can…keep writing and sharing your creative talent here and elsewhere…

[Frieda P]

Thanks Glen, you're repeating yourself. :-)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...

[annie lee]

All the merciless spinning and the momentary touch of another's fingers: what a ride.

[Frieda P]

What a ride indeed, thanks annie lee...

[wordwarrior]

Deep, thoughtful and images that really bring life to life lol. Your words are so true. We have to find our own deep connection with life and I think the rest of the dots will join themselves.
Beautiful imagery Frieda. Another wonderful poem from you!

[Frieda P]

You're too kind wordwarrior, thanks for your gracious review my friend!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Perhaps THIS is the meaning we are meant to decipher through all the abstract in our lives, Frieda! I'm going to need more "chunky monkey" for this one! Fabulous, my friend! ; )

[Frieda P]

Perhaps, and I'll definitely join you in that Chunky Monkey my friend! ;-)

[MikeV]

Very beautiful, you're writing aways takes my mind to a different place
well done my friend :)

[Frieda P]

What a gracious thing to say, thanks Mike!

[Michael G. Smith]

So true we are all our own universe. I famous saying "No man is an island".

[Frieda P]

Thanks Mike, exactly...

[Mark]

yes, little stars shining in the darkness of our limited perception. See me, Hear me, Feel me!

[Frieda P]

What, WHO, thanks you old hippie you. ;-)

[Dr. Wood ?]

It's what makes us all tick...Or indeed TOCK....It is human nature ....To quote The Life of Brian...We are ALL individuals...Jumbled and very fractured....Another masterstroke from your pen

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille my friend, muchly appreciated doc.

[Dr. Wood ?]

ta very much would have been ok...But Italian has more glamour and finesse

[Frieda P]

...and we have the best pasta too. ;-)

[Dr. Wood ?]

Caint argue with that..Used to live above an Italian DELI

[Frieda P]

Oh my, that would make me fat..............

[Dr. Wood ?]

Well WE had to move, They got the cranes out to get us to ground level and we then went on a drastic diet..Ha

[Tom]

A conundrum that was eventually resolved, well penned Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Ha I love that word 'conundrum' thanks Tom!

[David Scott]

Yes Frieda, we do live a "dizzy" life and usually in some sort of "tizzy". ;)
It is nice to think we can be "jumbled & fractured" and still be functioning beautifully!
I feel like my life is a kaleidoscope at times... Twisted can be wonderful. Ha.
Very well penned.

[Frieda P]

I like your kind of twisted Scott. ;-)

[K. Louis]

those moments when the 'bigger picture' lingers at the tips of our fingers makes all the frazzle dazzle of the catching, worth it.

[Frieda P]

Frazzle dazzle, I like that :-) thanks K.