"Life IS a kaleidoscope..."

Inspired by another poet's words, thank you Chris.

"Life IS a kaleidoscope of uncontrolled moments cascading across our consciousness..."

As I stumbled about in your words 

   I knew you were onto something

    no wonder I'm always dizzy 

              and my mind in a tizzy

I sigh'd in the knowledge

      I'm not the only one that gets caught up,

in my thoughts being all jumbled & fractured

   it's the same difference

        no matter who you are

we're all twinkling stars

    in our own little universe

ever shifting in our perception 

     and altered pattern views

        wishing to connect

   on some deeper level within the bigger picture,

   the vivacity of colors in our world,

               that we so aptly call  *life*

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Frieda - The theme with this gives in the lines...descriptive and appealing...Good to read your work…Thanks for the invite to read your thoughts to paper at Writers Café...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...will be busy the next few months...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...for late next month release…I have very little time on my hands…making the most of everyday and taking today to read as many as I can…keep writing and sharing your creative talent here and elsewhere…

[Frieda P]

Thanks Glen, you're repeating yourself. :-)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...

[Barbara Walker]

A great metaphor for life!

[Rebecca Buller]

A very lyrical piece, Frieda. We've always known we were stars, but it's nice to see it in print. Ha-ha! Fantabulous!

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm a twinkling star? Now that's funny

[Frieda P]

Lol Baby, you're more like the fractured part...ha

[Renée]

Chris does have a way of taking us for flights... life the one thing we do know ..it is ever changing..interesting how many different ways there is to describe events... defiantly a kaleidoscope, nicely done

[Frieda P]

Thanks Renee, and yes Chris has that profound effect...glad you enjoyed. :-)

[Renée]

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[Pryde Foltz]

The hint is seeing and capturing the colour. Found this piece inspiring.

[Frieda P]

Hmm more like capturing the light, the colors are fractured.... thanks for your thoughts here Pryde.

[Art Sun]

so thats what this life all about...

jkidding...

life is filled with so much variety not just within the visual, nice work Frieda....

[Frieda P]

Thanks Art, variety is the spice...yep. :-)

[Eddie Phillips]

That inpiration served you well. This was a great poem.

[Frieda P]

Yes it did, I have Chris to thank, glad you enjoyed my musings, thanks Eddie.

[TL Boehm]

stumbling over words - story of my life. and yet those mixed up words are indeed fractal - splitting off on themselves in repetitive brilliant mathematical patterns. its why we're crazy, Frieda. We're fractured fractals.

[Frieda P]

Don't I know it Tam, I'm that blue fractured fractal right beside you...ha

[Levmada]

This is so amazing, I love it

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your visit and review Levmada, much appreciated.