~Fools Rush In

Fools Rush In...

You rushed in like the fool tide
changed the entire heart scape,
then completely ebbed away...

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

ugh frieda how is one supposed to respond to this?! it's good an well written, and the message is clear and effective but there is no way to pleasantly review it! other than using the cliched wowsers on you again lol. good job, impossible to review on, despite the fact i just did..

[Frieda P]

Laughing here Jen, I think you did a pretty good job of it, thanks :-)

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome...why do my obscure reviews get the features?

[wordwarrior]

Oh bravo! How do you keep coming up with these awesome poems! And there is such a wealth of emotion in this. Just amazing writing! Clapping here wildly!

[Frieda P]

Wow thanks for the gracious review wordwarrior, much appreciated!

[Baby Ricochet]

That's about the size of it.

[Frieda P]

Sometimes, yep........ thanks Baby.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such as fools do!... and what a wild ride it can be... (sigh)

The emotion, although fleeting, is deeply embedded in the heart..

Lovely write, Friedalicious!~xoxo~:)

[Frieda P]

Yep, wet & wild and then you drown, thanks Robbie! xoox

[Angel]

Well, you know they do say that it isn't the size of the wave that counts...
It is the motion of the ocean!

Very cute write, my sexy friend!!

[Frieda P]

Hahah now you know that's not true Angel... ;-)

[Angel]

What? You aren't my sexy friend?????

[Frieda P]

Hahah very funny....you know what I'm tawkin bout Willis!!! ;-P

[Angel]

0;-D...................

[Souladareatease]

Beautiful sadness here Frieda!!!
Things that bring us joy or whom seem rare indeed!!!
Lovely Write!!!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille!

[Souladareatease]

wait...???....
Dempsey Gillespie??? ;)

[Frieda P]

Hahaha yeah that, I guess you're not Italiano, thanks a million!.... ;-P

[Souladareatease]

Hahahaha I Know those words too ;)
Always the need to be a clown :D

[TL Boehm]

oh this is EXCELLENT - perhaps one of the best haiku I've read and I've read a dancing plethora of them.

[Frieda P]

It's not really a Haiku Tam, just random thoughts that popped into my head, thanks, and I love that word 'plethora'...............

[Lydia Shutter]

Great metaphor! Can't trust those waves, can ya? I liked this. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Nope, never trust a big one Lydi, thanks so much ;-)

[Lydia Shutter]

LOL you naughty girl! :)

[Frieda P]

Am seriously laughing out loud now ;-)

[Lydia Shutter]

GOOD! That was the intention! :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

that's blokes for ya.......

[Frieda P]

Pssh and pfft doc, that's all you have to say in defense of your gender? ;-P

[Dr. Wood ?]

I can hide in my MAVIS world...so there!!!!

[Frieda P]

Mavis said she's on my side btw!! ;-P

[Dr. Wood ?]

Eh Mavis, that Frieda of whom your so fond
you know
bloody poet from over the pond
she only said she's your best mate Mavis dear
Oh Mavis
I 'm sorry, it's only ONE tear.
We've always been close Mave
and now I'm upset.
you'll just have to chose gal
I'm sorry my pet.
Is Frieda your favourite
or Mave, is it me?
Oh don't give your answer
I'm scared
Don't you see?

[Frieda P]

Mave said to say 'sorry doc', but you know us gals have to stick together! Ha-ha, love this, you're the best!

[Dr. Wood ?]

Well tell her it's the last bloody poem I write about HER....Bloody women......We're all the same....Oh this is getting confusing...where's my Ted

[Frieda P]

Have a drink luv, it's almost bedtime on your side of the pond...ha cheers!

[Pryde Foltz]

A ravaging tide indeed. Great one, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Pryde.

[Marie]

That's what happens with a rushing tide...

[Frieda P]

Sometimes, or often times should I say, thanks Marie.