ugh frieda how is one supposed to respond to this?! it's good an well written, and the message is clear and effective but there is no way to pleasantly review it! other than using the cliched wowsers on you again lol. good job, impossible to review on, despite the fact i just did..
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Laughing here Jen, I think you did a pretty good job of it, thanks :-)
11 Years Ago
welcome...why do my obscure reviews get the features?
"Wise men say...only fools rush in... But I can't help...falling in love with you." Do you know that song, Pryde? This piece of yours remind me of that song (I forgot the title.) :D
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11 Years Ago
I know that song, usually I get called Rita, but I'll take Pryde too, thanks Blue! ;-D
.. read moreI know that song, usually I get called Rita, but I'll take Pryde too, thanks Blue! ;-D
By the way it's aptly named Fools Rush In, and Elvis does it. ;-)
"...like the fool tide..." Such good words to put together. This describes how sometimes you have no say in who your heart chooses to believe in. Nicely done in three lines, Frieda. Angi~
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11 Years Ago
Exactly Angi, the heart wants what the heart wants, thanks so much.
This is such a powerful poem. I love the concept of how the untelling tides slowly change the heart scapes of a person. I feel like we have all been here before, and it's one hell of a lesson. Great job, my Jersey sista.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Cord, glad you enjoyed, tides are constantly changing in joisey eh? ;-)
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..