~Fools Rush In

Fools Rush In...

You rushed in like the fool tide
changed the entire heart scape,
then completely ebbed away...

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

ugh frieda how is one supposed to respond to this?! it's good an well written, and the message is clear and effective but there is no way to pleasantly review it! other than using the cliched wowsers on you again lol. good job, impossible to review on, despite the fact i just did..

[Frieda P]

Laughing here Jen, I think you did a pretty good job of it, thanks :-)

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome...why do my obscure reviews get the features?

[B-poet]

Short, Sweet & to the Point here. Great Work Frieda. A profound & poignant write. :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"Wise men say...only fools rush in... But I can't help...falling in love with you." Do you know that song, Pryde? This piece of yours remind me of that song (I forgot the title.) :D

[Frieda P]

I know that song, usually I get called Rita, but I'll take Pryde too, thanks Blue! ;-D

By the way it's aptly named Fools Rush In, and Elvis does it. ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

The words told the truth. Sometime good to be foolish. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Sometimes, you're right Coyote, thanks :-)

[Angi]

"...like the fool tide..." Such good words to put together. This describes how sometimes you have no say in who your heart chooses to believe in. Nicely done in three lines, Frieda. Angi~

[Frieda P]

Exactly Angi, the heart wants what the heart wants, thanks so much.

[Emerald Seas]

A pointed thought, well articulated in so few words. Sometimes the best writes are those that are short and to the point!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sirrah, not usually that brief but this one just fell out of my pen, jazzed you enjoyed! :-)

[Pete Langley]

You coined impermanence wonderfully, sweetheart. I love "fool tide". P.

[Frieda P]

Thanks sweet P, so happy to see you back. ♥

[K. Louis]

fools rush in, I like that song btw..sometimes you have to be the fool.

[Frieda P]

You're so right, thanks for your visit and review, much appreciated.

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This is such a powerful poem. I love the concept of how the untelling tides slowly change the heart scapes of a person. I feel like we have all been here before, and it's one hell of a lesson. Great job, my Jersey sista.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Cord, glad you enjoyed, tides are constantly changing in joisey eh? ;-)

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yes,in that army green/brownish water ahhaaha

[Frieda P]

Ha c'mon it's been better than in the past...don't give anyone anymore ammunition again joisey ;-P

[Frieda P]

that was supposed to be *againt*.

[Barbara Walker]

Love the analogy and so few words saying so very much!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Barbara, jazzed you enjoyed!