~I Am

~I Am

A Poem by Frieda P

I am a fragrant lily
soft as morning dew,
 strength of mother lioness
    protecting her cubs

I am nonsense, clever,
   sensual & extravagant
I can make your day
   or break your heart

Take care of business,
   roar in the bedroom 
     appetizer in the galley   

I could raise your sun
  or blow your mind
Be your concubine
   or take control

I am tender inside
 and out
with a soul 
   of titanium

I bend but
don't break me

I am woman
in purest form


© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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The true heart of a woman ... yes, a true woman.
I can make your day
or break your heart" are the lines which are captivating for me. I think it depends upon the personality of the man, huh! So don't dare to tease a woman. LOL.

Like it, Frieda. I salute this piece for women like us!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille dhaye, ha, and so true my friend!



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I really love the simple message in this and how you stretched it in so many different ways. It's comforting to know that we can be any type of woman we want, but as long as we stay true to who we are. Let our personality and dreams guide us in the right direction. It doesn't matter who we are, but as long as we know ourselves both inside and out. Splendid write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you got that message from it Svetlana, I really wrote it with all women in mind, yes exactl.. read more
I Am Svetlana

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :) I'm glad to have stumbled upon this delightful read.
This poem hones an excellent rhythmic quality, and soft cadence that takes the reader quickly into the moment- and then takes them back out again . . . like having a little bit of the sun that whiffs by for but a moment of our lifetime. Very nicely done. Mesmerizing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Foxemerald, I always love reading your reviews, glad you enjoyed.
Foxemerald

11 Years Ago

Your welcome, Frieda.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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