The true heart of a woman ... yes, a true woman.
I can make your day
or break your heart" are the lines which are captivating for me. I think it depends upon the personality of the man, huh! So don't dare to tease a woman. LOL.
Like it, Frieda. I salute this piece for women like us!
I really love the simple message in this and how you stretched it in so many different ways. It's comforting to know that we can be any type of woman we want, but as long as we stay true to who we are. Let our personality and dreams guide us in the right direction. It doesn't matter who we are, but as long as we know ourselves both inside and out. Splendid write :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I'm glad you got that message from it Svetlana, I really wrote it with all women in mind, yes exactl.. read moreI'm glad you got that message from it Svetlana, I really wrote it with all women in mind, yes exactly...thanks so much! :-)
11 Years Ago
You're welcome :) I'm glad to have stumbled upon this delightful read.
This poem hones an excellent rhythmic quality, and soft cadence that takes the reader quickly into the moment- and then takes them back out again . . . like having a little bit of the sun that whiffs by for but a moment of our lifetime. Very nicely done. Mesmerizing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Foxemerald, I always love reading your reviews, glad you enjoyed.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..