~I Am

~I Am

A Poem by Frieda P

I am a fragrant lily
soft as morning dew,
 strength of mother lioness
    protecting her cubs

I am nonsense, clever,
   sensual & extravagant
I can make your day
   or break your heart

Take care of business,
   roar in the bedroom 
     appetizer in the galley   

I could raise your sun
  or blow your mind
Be your concubine
   or take control

I am tender inside
 and out
with a soul 
   of titanium

I bend but
don't break me

I am woman
in purest form


© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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The true heart of a woman ... yes, a true woman.
I can make your day
or break your heart" are the lines which are captivating for me. I think it depends upon the personality of the man, huh! So don't dare to tease a woman. LOL.

Like it, Frieda. I salute this piece for women like us!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille dhaye, ha, and so true my friend!



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Multi-faceted and full of surprises....you are! A study in contrasts...leather and lace! Helen Reddy had nothing on you when she sang, "I am Woman!" I liked this one a lot, Frieda. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Coming from another invincible woman, that means a lot, thanks Lydi! RAWR ;-)
I saw Helen in person performing...a long time ago...she was great as this poem was also...
I Bend but don't break me...I liked that....Rose:)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SyberRose

11 Years Ago

I don't know what happened...i saw here in a small theatre in Wilm.De.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Do you realize she's 71! ? Just googled her,I had no clue....woo times flies.
SyberRose

11 Years Ago

It sure does haa
I loved this! I actually wanted to quote a favorite
part but id have to quote the whole piece :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Awh thanks for your kind words Mike, sweet review my friend! :-)
This is such a beautiful and secretive way to express what a woman is! Great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

It's no secret how resilient we are Shivam, thanks so much. :-)
Shivam Murari

11 Years Ago

Definitely! :)
Who could come away doubting the fact that you are indeed a woman. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind words my friend.
I'm so glad when a woman knows her true wealth and value and above all her relevance in all matters. You exude the power personality of a woman of integrity and love...
There is an Arab saying : "A woman that rocks a cradle or a crib with one hand will rock the world with the other"...A splendid read and write...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Hahaha. Good idea...:)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What size you need? ;-)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

No need . Thank you kindly...:)
I love how all of the words blend together to show who "you" are. Very specific yet profound. I love how you said "I bend but don't break me" nicely done :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks JS, nice to see you back here, we don't break that easily. ;-) Did you get those numbers tog.. read more
Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Planning on a good one about that... posting it this weekend. Got a law exam for tomorrow :')
Very nice! I really like this one . I've always believed men need women more than the other way around and not in a chauvinst 'make me a sandwich' way. This points to all the things women are. Was it hard leaving out zephyrs and butterflies?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahah you couldn't leave it alone could you? ;-P There are butterflies in there, read between the l.. read more
Wow!!!! I am a woman in purest form, This is all I needed today. " I am tender inside and out with a soul
of titanium" this line is true about you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cassie

11 Years Ago

wow!!!!!!! thank you, I don't know why your comment has brought tears into my eyes. thank you thank .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sometimes we need reminding how resilient we truly are, happy tears I hope! :-)
Cassie

11 Years Ago

Yes happy tears....
All of these things and more I would say. I didn't see mention of amazing poetess in there anywhere, but that is something we already know. Beautiful my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You flatter me kind sir, glad you enjoyed my girlie musings here ;-) Thanks Jack.

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