~I Am

~I Am

A Poem by Frieda P

I am a fragrant lily
soft as morning dew,
 strength of mother lioness
    protecting her cubs

I am nonsense, clever,
   sensual & extravagant
I can make your day
   or break your heart

Take care of business,
   roar in the bedroom 
     appetizer in the galley   

I could raise your sun
  or blow your mind
Be your concubine
   or take control

I am tender inside
 and out
with a soul 
   of titanium

I bend but
don't break me

I am woman
in purest form


© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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The true heart of a woman ... yes, a true woman.
I can make your day
or break your heart" are the lines which are captivating for me. I think it depends upon the personality of the man, huh! So don't dare to tease a woman. LOL.

Like it, Frieda. I salute this piece for women like us!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille dhaye, ha, and so true my friend!



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Oh I love the flow of this Frieda and the imagery is soft, yet striking and powerful with it's intent.
Gorgeous writing, as always!
Men and women be warned!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha, thanks wordwarrior, muchly appreciate your kind words!
Helen Reddy would love this.."i am definitely woman, hear me roar, or purr"

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks jacob, do you know that Helen Reddy is 71?
I am nonsense, clever,
sensual & extravagant
I can make your day
or break your heart

Love this whole piece, Frieda, but especially this stanza. Sound that barbaric yawp, Sister!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahah caught this on live feed, I'm hysterical, you made me cry Rita! Lol Sister! ;-)
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

. . . ;) . . .
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

RAWR ;-) ...................
You are a master. You intrigue and gracefully give of your heat. You bare you soul and hid just enough to make my imagination flow. So fun yet so tasty.
Your mind is so delicious. Keep writing my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wooo doing the happy dance to your review, thanks Tom!
You said it! We are ... and so, so much more!

:) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Exactly! ;-)
Wow, you sound like quite a woman. And quite a braggart also, lol. Does no nonsense mean no sense of humor? I hope not.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

Know, I just am in love and don't want to see my wife have to do things after a hard days work if I .. read more
Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

Oh and I am a neat freak also.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I think you're an alien Mike....too good to be true.
roar in the bedroom. Appetizer in the galley. That line made me smile.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha laughing here Tam, c'mon you know we have to do it all.....
Very good music and amazing poetry. Woman are what men need and will never completely understand. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha I concur Coyote, smart man...
I enjoyed the simple form of this poem of definition. The last two lines as well as the picture at the bottom inspired me to write this tiny gift quatrain for you to keep as your own:

Silhouette

I’m your silhouette
before the Harvest Moon,
a well formed inset
where all the stars are strewn.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Women are many different things wrapped up in a beautiful package. And for that one special person we are all things... This one made me smile!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Indeed we are, jazzed this made you smile hon! xo

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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