The true heart of a woman ... yes, a true woman.
I can make your day
or break your heart" are the lines which are captivating for me. I think it depends upon the personality of the man, huh! So don't dare to tease a woman. LOL.
Like it, Frieda. I salute this piece for women like us!
Oh I love the flow of this Frieda and the imagery is soft, yet striking and powerful with it's intent.
Gorgeous writing, as always!
Men and women be warned!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Haha, thanks wordwarrior, muchly appreciate your kind words!
You are a master. You intrigue and gracefully give of your heat. You bare you soul and hid just enough to make my imagination flow. So fun yet so tasty.
Your mind is so delicious. Keep writing my friend.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Wooo doing the happy dance to your review, thanks Tom!
Wow, you sound like quite a woman. And quite a braggart also, lol. Does no nonsense mean no sense of humor? I hope not.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
It's about me and every 'woman', do we have a sense of humor, apparently, we put up with you guys do.. read moreIt's about me and every 'woman', do we have a sense of humor, apparently, we put up with you guys don't we? ;-)
11 Years Ago
Hey, hey, hey now every woman would be so blessed to have a man like me. I cook, clean house, do lau.. read moreHey, hey, hey now every woman would be so blessed to have a man like me. I cook, clean house, do laundry and the food shopping and work out of town four days every week. I do it all, baby, lol.
Know, I just am in love and don't want to see my wife have to do things after a hard days work if I .. read moreKnow, I just am in love and don't want to see my wife have to do things after a hard days work if I can dothem for her. And it means more free time to be with her.
11 Years Ago
Oh and I am a neat freak also.
11 Years Ago
I think you're an alien Mike....too good to be true.
I enjoyed the simple form of this poem of definition. The last two lines as well as the picture at the bottom inspired me to write this tiny gift quatrain for you to keep as your own:
Silhouette
I’m your silhouette
before the Harvest Moon,
a well formed inset
where all the stars are strewn.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..