The true heart of a woman ... yes, a true woman.
I can make your day
or break your heart" are the lines which are captivating for me. I think it depends upon the personality of the man, huh! So don't dare to tease a woman. LOL.
Like it, Frieda. I salute this piece for women like us!
The true heart of a woman ... yes, a true woman.
I can make your day
or break your heart" are the lines which are captivating for me. I think it depends upon the personality of the man, huh! So don't dare to tease a woman. LOL.
Like it, Frieda. I salute this piece for women like us!
wow!! this is such a beautiful description of women, its you........soft as morning dew.
loved it:)
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11 Years Ago
It's *US* Vani, thanks so much my friend, and also for adding it to your FB page, I'm humbled to say.. read moreIt's *US* Vani, thanks so much my friend, and also for adding it to your FB page, I'm humbled to say the least.
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God may have created man before woman,
But there is always a rough draft before the masterpiec.. read moreGod may have created man before woman,
But there is always a rough draft before the masterpiece.
I love how you go from being a delicate flower to a fierce lioness. I love the contrasts here. It's those surges of pure self esteem you get, that make you come up with all this awesome s**t :D This is super inspirational!
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11 Years Ago
Ha that made me smile, 0-60 in 2.7 sec, that is woman ;-) Thanks Siren!
11 Years Ago
I don't get why people see being a woman as unfortunate. You have so many advantages!
Someone once told me that God created man first, and then, having figured out what He was doing wrong, He created His masterpiece...woman.
This is exquisite, Frieda...one of your best yet. I love it...
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11 Years Ago
Oh I like that Angel....thanks so much my sweet friend...
well described really begs the question what is purist form as far as women go. they have different characteristics but also a femininity that can't be defined or pinned down its amazing really well done with your poem Frieda i guess you know enough on the topic to write on it. and this review is taking me long to write because whenever i discuss women I tread lightly lol but really if femininity had to pinned though it can't I think the dictionary would use this as a definition
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11 Years Ago
'Can't be defined' that's probably the best definition! Thanks Deron.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..