~I Am

~I Am

A Poem by Frieda P

I am a fragrant lily
soft as morning dew,
 strength of mother lioness
    protecting her cubs

I am nonsense, clever,
   sensual & extravagant
I can make your day
   or break your heart

Take care of business,
   roar in the bedroom 
     appetizer in the galley   

I could raise your sun
  or blow your mind
Be your concubine
   or take control

I am tender inside
 and out
with a soul 
   of titanium

I bend but
don't break me

I am woman
in purest form


© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P

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The true heart of a woman ... yes, a true woman.
I can make your day
or break your heart" are the lines which are captivating for me. I think it depends upon the personality of the man, huh! So don't dare to tease a woman. LOL.

Like it, Frieda. I salute this piece for women like us!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille dhaye, ha, and so true my friend!



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Your words encapsulate the strength and pride of woman, I love the power in this

Posted 11 Years Ago


I applaud the true essence of women shining brightly here, and that essence is the knowledge that a woman is more than society claims she is. As a strong feminist here: I have to say you've absolutely contributed well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This makes me think of Peggy Lee purring and grinding "I am a woman - W O M A N" -- I love this. Anything that makes me remember Peggy Lee singing is a wonderful thing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh, years ago, I played that song endlessly! So true! Women are so strong, in so many ways. If we harnessed our power, oh the changes we would make!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I totally love this! It completely shows how powerful we women can be if we put our minds to it and stay strong!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wow thanks for such an enthusiastic review, much appreciated Essa!
Essa G

11 Years Ago

No need to thank, Freida! I really loved your poem! It was amazing! :)
Stunning visuals and wonderfully put together. What an excellent read

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your visit and review Jace....
Indeed a true touch of Woman here- Beautiful strength with proper pride!!!
Wonderful Write Frieda!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh you know every once in a while you get that Hulk surge lol ;-)
Souladareatease

11 Years Ago

It's a must :D
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Green is my color but I go with it. ;-D
Amazing piece..really powerful..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your visit & review, much appreciated Kejara.
Riding the Rainbow

11 Years Ago

You're welcome;)) Plz take a look at my stuff;)))
You came up with words that perfectly describe women, Frieda.. Clever! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Probably could have thought of a few hundred more but the piece would have gone forever, ha, thanks .. read more
Elegant and strong... this pieces embodies exactly what you wanted it to. Awesome work, Frieda

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words Travis.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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