~Swim in You~

I fell for you like amber raindrops

burnished by the sun's satiation,

golden in my heart you will remain

our love story as sinister storm clouds,

turning sapphire skies to bleak trickles

sank in drowning pools of our own undoing

  baubles of lust dissipated on the horizon 

     yet I still swim in you on dismal days... 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Frieda - Now we can agree with the font and theme here in the lines...I miss reading all of you guys as of late...the music like YB I just read...gives to this verse...Good to read your work…Thanks for the invite to read your thoughts to paper at Writers Café...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...will be busy the next few months...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...for late next month release…I have very little time on my hands…making the most of everyday and taking today to read as many as I can…keep writing and sharing your creative talent here and elsewhere…

[Frieda P]

Finally you like one of the fonts I picked, it's about time, thanks for stopping and good luck with your project.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I just commented on one I did not like the font...hehehe...I'm heading to bed...I did as many as I could review tonight...Good night...Frieda...

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks again, have a good sleep Glen.

[icelandicblue]

We relive those moments...they can bring comfort and they are able to drown us. I am enamored of a love story buried in sinister clouds...it says so very much.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Anne, glad you enjoyed this one.

[Rita L. Sev]

Submerging ourselves in memory is a double-edged sword. If we swim, we will get stronger... if we don't... This piece grabs the heart, Frieda. Beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Rita.

[wordwarrior]

I think this is my very favourite of yours! Stunning and such beautiful imagery. To heck with the consequences, sometimes we have to go with the heart, as the star of your poem here does!
Always such a joy to read your writing!

[Frieda P]

Awh thanks so much wordwarrior, you humble me with your kind words.

[MikeV]

This was beautiful, the poem, the song, it was all just so beautiful
and sad. I felt like love is lost yet in your thoughts the love is brought back
that's how i took it :) and i loved it by the way

[Frieda P]

Thanks Mike, love your review my friend :-)