Nature's Poetic Embrace

Do you hear the snow,

 did you feel the leaves twirling

sitting with a cuppa hot sensory perception

    stirred by the wonderment of awe

sugar coatings in smoky essence of phantasm

   spirit visions looming on the horizon

waiting to be plucked and invoked

   playful muse dances within diffusion's vapors

catching the light of morning air

    breathe in the crispness of anticipation

length & breadth of manifestations,

     natures' spun revelations 

   spoken through inky passages

   breaking of bread to be shared,

    partake each slice and evoke humanity

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

breaking of bread to be shared, partake each slice and evoke humanity...

Love this, Frieda. Nature begs to be shared; Mother Earth invites her children to the table every season, but the darn brats are too busy to notice the banquet she has prepared...

[Frieda P]

Haha you sounded like a teacher when you said that. ;-) Thanks....

[Rita L. Sev]

Lol! I am what I am... ;)

[kublakhan27]

You must know that I would love this one Mrs.R, actually I'd have to say that this is one of my favourites, which is saying something in light of how all your works leave me in awe...I really love your way with words, I wish I could channel it somehow ;P Awesome piece my dear friend :) xo

[Frieda P]

Of course, you and nature, good thing you live where you do, you'd go bonkers in a big city, thanks Benji! ;-) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha oh don't worry, I learned that the hard way my dear...always a pleasure :) xo

[beautiful dreamer]

this is a wonderful piece Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jen! :-)

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome frieda!

[Sami Khalil]

You are inspired by love and nature and we are inspired by your wonderful poems...Splendid as always...:)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille, muchly appreciated. ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)

[Arthur Henn]

Your (Title) captured my eye (Beautiful!)

"Do you hear the snow" That line speaks volumes. They say every snowflake is different in design - I hear a soft whisper of each design and crystal of rainbow colour.

"breathe in the crispness of anticipation" My favorite line by far.

Frieda, the whole of your written poem is nature's embrace.

[Frieda P]

What a wonderful review, thanks so much for your visit Arthur, glad you enjoyed.

[SyberRose]

Such a beautiful poem to read first thing in the morning while drinking my coffee and listening
to that relaxing music....this was such a stunning piece you have penned Frieda....Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rose, jazzed you felt that. :-)

[Emerald Seas]

Sounds like a close knit writing group coming together in the early morning, sharing their words to describe their surroundings. Maybe it's just me. My dream state would be to own a cabin in the mountains and host writing groups or getaways for writers. This felt like a morning in such a place - lovely!

[Frieda P]

Wow Sirrah, I like that idea and your review, let me know when you do!

[Emerald Seas]

If I ever manage it, I will definitely let you know! :)

[MikeV]

Fantastic poem! it motivated me to write, i was amused by a muse :p

[Frieda P]

Thanks Mike, good to know. ;-)

[Lydia Shutter]

Inspirational! Nothing quite like that first cuppa joe on the front porch when the birds are chirping and the morning dew is evaporating with the sun's help. Such a serene ode to nature. Loved it. lydi**

[Frieda P]

Joe is my best friend in the morning, thanks Lydi.....

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful. The good description took me to good places and thoughts.
"playful muse dances within diffusion's vapors
catching the light of morning air"
A wise person understand the beauty of life and nature. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coyote, delighted to know it took you someplace good in your thoughts.

[Jack...]

Enjoy the day, every day. Share what you find with a friend and watch the smiles appear like the seasons. There is so much beauty waiting for each of us if we just open out eyes and look...just as I did this morning, finding this beautiful poem waiting for me. Gorgeous my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

Always love your poetic responses Jack, enjoy your day my sweet friend!