Oh Frieda, this did make me smile. There seem to be many poems around about writing poetry, but they are all so different and yours is a feast for the mind. I love that it's a circus, a metaphor for all the different styles of poetry(as you mentioned) and ways of expressing feelings.
What acrobatics we perform when writing. Your poem is such a lighthearted view of the process.
Wonderfully penned!
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Good way to put it wordwarrior, 'acrobatics' ha, very similar to poetry. :-) Thanks my friend.
Yay!! I love a good circus act, Friedalicious! LOL :D
There's bazaar, and then there's BAZAAR...
I think Ridonkulous should be the feature of this show! Don't you agree? LMAO! ;D
Entertaining write! ~xoxo~
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Jazzed you got a kick out of it Robbie, I should have added 'coffee' will be served on the mezzanine.. read moreJazzed you got a kick out of it Robbie, I should have added 'coffee' will be served on the mezzanine! LOL ;-) xoxo
a poem, about poems, with a senryu ending... I'll give it 4 snaps, and a twirl!!! bring on the "crazy clowns cursing"... like the way you think Frieda P. ~~redzone (And the way you write)!!!
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Ha my first 4 snaps, thanks! Yes, bring in the clowns...glad you enjoyed!
"All the eyes on me in the center of the ring
Just like a circus
When I crack that whip, everybody gonna trip
Just like a circus" -- Circus, Britney Spears......
This is a great write, I really enjoyed it, I wanna go to a circus I've never been to one, my gran and grandpa might take me sometime. :-) Anyhoo, another great write from you.
Kudos.
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Grazie mille nooble...when I craxk that whip eh? ;-)
Sounds like a sit down at the cafe! Let the show begin. Great creativity in this write. You come up with something new all the time. Loved this!
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Thanks Sirrah, I think there's an act where poems actually leap from a vault too LOL, sorry couldn't.. read moreThanks Sirrah, I think there's an act where poems actually leap from a vault too LOL, sorry couldn't resist ;-)
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Stay out of my vault! ;) I just started to figure out how to lock the damn thing
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Ha I'm very good at B&E ya know :-)
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Haha - I'm organizing a bunch for a book. So the vault actually may spring wide open! :) I am refrai.. read moreHaha - I'm organizing a bunch for a book. So the vault actually may spring wide open! :) I am refraining from publishing the bitter and angry bits, but the rest I figure is fair game. If I keep it to myself it just fighters. Might as well throw it out to the public for the readers to garner their own interpretation and relation to the words... At least that is kinda sorta what my publishers are saying!
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Fighters... Should be festers... Damn iPad gets an attitude once in a while ;)
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Wooo 50 Shades of Sirrah...let me know when.............!
Haha - it's more sappy than sultry, my friend. Not sure I'll do another poetry collection after this.. read moreHaha - it's more sappy than sultry, my friend. Not sure I'll do another poetry collection after this one, but it'll depend on my inspiration and what is acting as my muse in the future ;)
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With all that sex you're having now, I'm sure something will come up Lol ;-)
You’ve presented the nature of our poetic circus quite well in this easy flowing free verse listing of most of our clown acts on center stage. I should put villanelle clown makeup on for my next performance. Next time, my tiger jumps entire … through rhyming Rings of Fire.
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That's a good act to follow too, thanks Aethereal.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..