Oh Frieda, this did make me smile. There seem to be many poems around about writing poetry, but they are all so different and yours is a feast for the mind. I love that it's a circus, a metaphor for all the different styles of poetry(as you mentioned) and ways of expressing feelings.
What acrobatics we perform when writing. Your poem is such a lighthearted view of the process.
Wonderfully penned!
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11 Years Ago
Good way to put it wordwarrior, 'acrobatics' ha, very similar to poetry. :-) Thanks my friend.
Oh Frieda, this did make me smile. There seem to be many poems around about writing poetry, but they are all so different and yours is a feast for the mind. I love that it's a circus, a metaphor for all the different styles of poetry(as you mentioned) and ways of expressing feelings.
What acrobatics we perform when writing. Your poem is such a lighthearted view of the process.
Wonderfully penned!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Good way to put it wordwarrior, 'acrobatics' ha, very similar to poetry. :-) Thanks my friend.
A three ring circus filled with dazzling acts, graceful performances and magic tricks, made complete with dancing monkeys, clowns and side show freaks. A poetry Bizarre indeed.
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11 Years Ago
Ha dancing monkeys makes me laugh, mostly cheeky ones! Thanks Dye.
Oh goodie, goodie! We have a circus on the Cafe and it seems as if the big tent is packed with prime time entertainment. I can smell the popcorn and peanuts and am especially amused by all the monkeys - OMG, they are loose - they are now in all 3 rings, and here comes Frieda with some soothing words to lure them back and there's ....... with a big banana to share! Oh, I know I am bad! But, we are all kids at a circus and a poetry circus is when we can be the absolute "baddest"!!
Cute, really, cute! I love it!!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
What a delightful review, so refreshing Sheila, you put a huge smile on my face, so young at heart y.. read moreWhat a delightful review, so refreshing Sheila, you put a huge smile on my face, so young at heart you are! Thanks so much....
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..