~Poetry Bazaar~

~Poetry Bazaar~

A Poem by Frieda P

Welcome, one and all~
 takefont row seat
our poetry circus will begin
we have jugglers of similies
a tight rope act of sonnets
court jester'd hyperbole tunes
alliterations of crazy clowns cursing
dactyls of fluttering butterflies
hip hop be bop meter and rhyme
stanzas of personifications abound
our theme is a villanelle of understatement
our subplot a spondee of Knick Knacks
where syntax, whose words these are I think I know
quatrains and couplets together in rhythm & time,
ironic symbolism is our first act
a nature of haikus will follow
ending with the Senryu finale...

Please enjoy the show
take a load off and relax
from your point of view


© 2013 Frieda P


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Oh Frieda, this did make me smile. There seem to be many poems around about writing poetry, but they are all so different and yours is a feast for the mind. I love that it's a circus, a metaphor for all the different styles of poetry(as you mentioned) and ways of expressing feelings.
What acrobatics we perform when writing. Your poem is such a lighthearted view of the process.
Wonderfully penned!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Good way to put it wordwarrior, 'acrobatics' ha, very similar to poetry. :-) Thanks my friend.



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Indeed this show's best
When each one needs to unwind
Be pleased, weary soul!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ah we speak in poetic Senryu, thanks dhaye, lovely! ;-)
love this! it lightens my heart and makes me smile. what a fantastical world of poetry it its!
E.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed, this was a fun piece to write, thanks E!
Oh Frieda, this did make me smile. There seem to be many poems around about writing poetry, but they are all so different and yours is a feast for the mind. I love that it's a circus, a metaphor for all the different styles of poetry(as you mentioned) and ways of expressing feelings.
What acrobatics we perform when writing. Your poem is such a lighthearted view of the process.
Wonderfully penned!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Good way to put it wordwarrior, 'acrobatics' ha, very similar to poetry. :-) Thanks my friend.
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Dye
A three ring circus filled with dazzling acts, graceful performances and magic tricks, made complete with dancing monkeys, clowns and side show freaks. A poetry Bizarre indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha dancing monkeys makes me laugh, mostly cheeky ones! Thanks Dye.
A circus indeed - fun, entertaining, death-defying - and a touch of mystery... Cleverly penned, Frieda!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha death-defying, most days yep, thanks Rita!
In love with your pen hand, Frieda. Beyond fresh and so very fun of a read, but also purposeful. Outstanding, a true accomplishment.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

11 Years Ago

It shows!....
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I didn't even cry once.... ;-)
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

11 Years Ago

Good to know, between the two of us... we have to give sorrow a day off somewhere. lol
For sure it's a three ring circus! :) Love how you managed to get so many literary terms into this one, Frieda. Unique and clever. lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Indeed it is! Thanks muchly Lydie.
This was such an exciting write. Loved the metaphor.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Pryde, glad you enjoyed my three ring circus.
Oh goodie, goodie! We have a circus on the Cafe and it seems as if the big tent is packed with prime time entertainment. I can smell the popcorn and peanuts and am especially amused by all the monkeys - OMG, they are loose - they are now in all 3 rings, and here comes Frieda with some soothing words to lure them back and there's ....... with a big banana to share! Oh, I know I am bad! But, we are all kids at a circus and a poetry circus is when we can be the absolute "baddest"!!
Cute, really, cute! I love it!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What a delightful review, so refreshing Sheila, you put a huge smile on my face, so young at heart y.. read more
wow .. this is amazing !

Loved it !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Jazzed you enjoyed Sasha, thanks for dropping in, muchly appreciated!

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