Another illustration of a piece here...Frieda...the whole theme and your musical accompaniment blends this verse within your lines...
Thanks for the invite...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...will be busy the next few months...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...for late next month release…
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Glen, I guess the font was okay with you or you would have complained, good luck with the boo.. read moreThanks Glen, I guess the font was okay with you or you would have complained, good luck with the book, and you can promote it on my page anytime ;-)
11 Years Ago
You're welcome...and thanks also for your patronage...every bit of promote helps...one reader at a t.. read moreYou're welcome...and thanks also for your patronage...every bit of promote helps...one reader at a time...the best is word of mouth...good night...just checking my email...and saw you replied...
"Gypsy wild at heart, I wander in my mind's lust music lives in my soul of capricious whimsy's tunes never content to remain captive too long" written with such beauty!
Great write! :)
Smiling.
"just don't reign in my kismet" I love it.
I think the "Gypsy Life" is one of those mystical dreams we all look at and think how mysterious and wonderful it must be. Yet the reality is a simple pleasure of fleeting joys and beliefs in the unknown. This is a part of life we all can live.
A lovely poetic thought Frieda! Nobody better think of messing with your kismet. ;)
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11 Years Ago
Ahhh you made my day by gracing me with your presence Scott! Thanks, ha, exactly, the kismet is off.. read moreAhhh you made my day by gracing me with your presence Scott! Thanks, ha, exactly, the kismet is off limits ;-)
This was a magical piece for me. Yes, be wary of those who would rein in your expression especially one own self.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks so much Pryde, glad you enjoyed...and especially one's self, we can be our own worst enemy at.. read moreThanks so much Pryde, glad you enjoyed...and especially one's self, we can be our own worst enemy at times...
A amazing poem. I like the energy and hope in the poem.
"I need to sing anew, intoxicated songs of delectation
the poetry of life adds that extra spicy gusto
sweeps of magenta grandeur & pomegrante's passion
I prance in the moonlight's bohemian spirit's envy"
I like the above lines. I need to live this life. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
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11 Years Ago
I need to live this life too my friend, thanks Coyote!
A wandering spirit lookig for life's clues , love's blues wanting to sing anew the songs of love enraptured in its joys of endless moments of romance in gusto...A splendid read and write...:)
The sensations and visions that flooded my mind while reading this absolutely spellbinding poem are virtually indescribable. If in fact your poetic incantation was, as it seems to me, casting some sort of magic spell please know that I surrender completely to it. I can see wings and colors, sparkling trinkets and floating musical notes. Exotic flowers of vivacious fragrance, striped tents with stardust flags waving and cosmic tamborines playing on the wind. This was more than the world beautiful could ever describe...enchanting, only to say the least. Amazing Frieda, oh how I love to dance in your world.
Ah Jack, you fell for it, you're under a spell now, you'll be sending me all your paychecks for the .. read moreAh Jack, you fell for it, you're under a spell now, you'll be sending me all your paychecks for the next ten months. ;-) I meant thanks so much my sweet friend!
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..