~~Gypsy Soul Whimsy

~~Gypsy Soul Whimsy

A Poem by Frieda P

Gypsy wild at heart, I wander in my mind's lust
  music lives in my soul of capricious whimsy's 
t
unes 
    never content to remain captive too long

 I need to sing anew, intoxicated songs of delectation
      the poetry of life adds that extra spicy gusto
    sweeps  of magenta grandeur & pomegrante's passion
      I prance in the moonlight's bohemian spirit's envy

      Cynical skeptics spell a darkly captive cast 
       I prance over their cryptic poison dust
         these gypsy wings are joyfulness enraptured

           No one can undo this spell of zingara's relish
             walk in the critc's nature of unpoetic stanzas
       if you're so inclined,       just don't reign in my kismet

               Romance me & dance in this intense ardor~
                                                  of  wanderlust's destiny


© 2013 Frieda P


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Another illustration of a piece here...Frieda...the whole theme and your musical accompaniment blends this verse within your lines...

Thanks for the invite...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...will be busy the next few months...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...for late next month release…



Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Glen, I guess the font was okay with you or you would have complained, good luck with the boo.. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

11 Years Ago

You're welcome...and thanks also for your patronage...every bit of promote helps...one reader at a t.. read more



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"Gypsy wild at heart, I wander in my mind's lust music lives in my soul of capricious whimsy's tunes never content to remain captive too long" written with such beauty!
Great write! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Mike! ;-)
A spectacular rendering of the romance and the magical ambiance of the gypsy soul...Rose:)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rose, glad you enjoyed, like the new pic by the way. :-)
SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda:)
That was pretty awesome poem there!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Jon, much appreciate your visit & review!
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11 Years Ago

Your quite welcome:)
Smiling.
"just don't reign in my kismet" I love it.
I think the "Gypsy Life" is one of those mystical dreams we all look at and think how mysterious and wonderful it must be. Yet the reality is a simple pleasure of fleeting joys and beliefs in the unknown. This is a part of life we all can live.
A lovely poetic thought Frieda! Nobody better think of messing with your kismet. ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ahhh you made my day by gracing me with your presence Scott! Thanks, ha, exactly, the kismet is off.. read more
This was a magical piece for me. Yes, be wary of those who would rein in your expression especially one own self.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Pryde, glad you enjoyed...and especially one's self, we can be our own worst enemy at.. read more
A amazing poem. I like the energy and hope in the poem.
"I need to sing anew, intoxicated songs of delectation
the poetry of life adds that extra spicy gusto
sweeps of magenta grandeur & pomegrante's passion
I prance in the moonlight's bohemian spirit's envy"
I like the above lines. I need to live this life. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I need to live this life too my friend, thanks Coyote!
A wandering spirit lookig for life's clues , love's blues wanting to sing anew the songs of love enraptured in its joys of endless moments of romance in gusto...A splendid read and write...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Sami, jazzed you enjoyed :-)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Always jazzed...:)........
The sensations and visions that flooded my mind while reading this absolutely spellbinding poem are virtually indescribable. If in fact your poetic incantation was, as it seems to me, casting some sort of magic spell please know that I surrender completely to it. I can see wings and colors, sparkling trinkets and floating musical notes. Exotic flowers of vivacious fragrance, striped tents with stardust flags waving and cosmic tamborines playing on the wind. This was more than the world beautiful could ever describe...enchanting, only to say the least. Amazing Frieda, oh how I love to dance in your world.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ah Jack, you fell for it, you're under a spell now, you'll be sending me all your paychecks for the .. read more
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Another ten months...sheesh.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL...................touche!
Romance me & dance in this intense ardor~
of wanderlust's destiny

Frieda... I could not have written this so eloquently as you have... you've conjured up a whimsical feast of delights in this wonderful poem.

Beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much YB, you humble me with your kind words my friend.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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