~~Gypsy Soul Whimsy

~~Gypsy Soul Whimsy

A Poem by Frieda P

Gypsy wild at heart, I wander in my mind's lust
  music lives in my soul of capricious whimsy's 
t
unes 
    never content to remain captive too long

 I need to sing anew, intoxicated songs of delectation
      the poetry of life adds that extra spicy gusto
    sweeps  of magenta grandeur & pomegrante's passion
      I prance in the moonlight's bohemian spirit's envy

      Cynical skeptics spell a darkly captive cast 
       I prance over their cryptic poison dust
         these gypsy wings are joyfulness enraptured

           No one can undo this spell of zingara's relish
             walk in the critc's nature of unpoetic stanzas
       if you're so inclined,       just don't reign in my kismet

               Romance me & dance in this intense ardor~
                                                  of  wanderlust's destiny


© 2013 Frieda P


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Another illustration of a piece here...Frieda...the whole theme and your musical accompaniment blends this verse within your lines...

Thanks for the invite...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...will be busy the next few months...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...for late next month release…



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Glen, I guess the font was okay with you or you would have complained, good luck with the boo.. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

11 Years Ago

You're welcome...and thanks also for your patronage...every bit of promote helps...one reader at a t.. read more



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I read this beautiful free spirit poem again and again so I could dance along.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh wow M.G. what a great compliment, dance away.....
Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

I cant seem to add you as a friend?
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Happens sometimes, let me see if I can do it from my end....
I love how you beautifully weave your words. Splendid read and write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Ghost, much appreciated.
Flighty and full of whimsy - an apt rendition of wanderlust! Nice penning :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Sirrah :-)
Zingara .....shipwrecked in the Red Sea....hmmmm....seems to me this one is a bit of a vent. "Don't rain on my parade" sort of thing. Music does live in your soul and anyone who tries to silence it is not worth worrying about. Do dance over their poison, Frieda...for soon they will be drinking their own venom. The images in this poem are just splendid. Wonderful work. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You read me too well my friend, must be the joisey in you. ;-) Thanks so much Lydi!
Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

No such thing as too well.....let's just say I have been there and there's nothing like a veiled ven.. read more
This resoanted...to be the free bird, to sing clearly and loudly, to relish the essence of happiness in elegant beautiful freedom, in the true sense of the word...the heart can be happy in such a state, this is beautiful xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thrilled you enjoyed Poppy, thanks love xox
I have learnt so many new words from this piece. Thank you dear

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You're welcome, dontcha love when that happens? :-)
Great word choice and word play. The end struck me the most: Romance me & dance in this intense ardor~of wanderlust's destiny. Simply dream-like and beautiful!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Jazzed you enjoyed Blue, thanks so much!
Here the hallmark of Frieda`s work, the rich language that is typical of her work...and zingara will send me
to google...good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Leslie, same as gypsy with a zing to it, glad you enjoyed.
this feels like you, Frieda...you do seem to have that personality...almost like a gypsy...not so much literally but in your poetry, you dance and sing and have great movement in many directions.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh wow jacob, thanks for this gracious review, my mother used to call me Gypsy but she didn't mean i.. read more
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Dye
" I prance over their cryptic poison dust"

and just like that, you don't let it have any effect. You won't be brought down. I love the title too, so carefree. And I only needed to Google two words this time. LOL

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha you make me laugh Dye, thanks a million! ;-)

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