Spinning, Spinning Spinning Blue Wheel of Writer's Cafe. Senryu

Spinning, Spinning Spinning Blue Wheel of Writer's Cafe. Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
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~so tired of the spinning, spinning, spinning is anyone else getting dizzy...

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All I want to say~
Blue wheel, blue wheel, go away
don't come back ever!

Should post under 'horror' heading...

© 2013 Frieda P


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Sometimes it seems like there is an evil plot going on here. The cyber gremlins are out to get us. I wanted to catch up on reading poetry today and that dreaded blue wheel is getting me after EVERY poem. UGH! Thanks for making me feel it is not just me! Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I agree Lydia, this blue spinning wheel is making me bobinz....you're not alone!



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haha I thought it was just me...... nicely put Fp... :)

YB

Posted 11 Years Ago


How I can empathize with this one, Frieda! I'm ready to sign a petition or anything it takes for them to speed the system up a bit. There's little enough time to give to poetry without spending so much of it watching a blue ball twirl. Great poem, great cause!

Posted 11 Years Ago


How that freaking blue circle gets on my nerves...... Grrrrr!

Posted 11 Years Ago


It is an exercise in patience trying to read or comment on a poem on WC. It is why I need two glasses of wine... ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tired of waiting? You're not alone. Being patient is the best characteristic of writers here. LOL.

Nice sentiryu (sentiment in a senryu).

Posted 11 Years Ago


I copy my reviews when that darn wheel starts going, then hit refresh... About 90% of the time my comments post with the refresh. However, I learned my lesson on the other 10%...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I've started doing the same, they do post most times, but you're still waiting for the spin to stop... read more
chuckling here...well SAID Freida!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

C'mon Chris, can't you fix this..............?!
Chris

11 Years Ago

well I did on my systems...
Hypnotized actually. Good one, Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Did it make you act like a chicken?
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Dye
So it's not just me LOL... I feel like I have dial up access again....what's the point in having high speed internet. I feel your pain.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I haven't a clue, but I can write just so many stooopid Senryus in the interim! LOL
Round and round it goes, when it stops nobody knows ;P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Were you writing another kraken Red? haha
redflutterby

11 Years Ago

Yes...it's all my fault!! WC can't handle my heat...;-pp
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Don't ask ;P

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Added on September 21, 2013
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Frieda P
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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