~For all the tortured poets on the WC and beyond...
“Heaven deliver us, what's a poet? Something that can't go to bed without making a song about it.” ― Dorothy L. Sayers
Where do old poets go to die
are we ever laid to rest
could our words live on
into the cosmos for posterity
Old dusty book shelves our castles,
our pen the sword that exults us
Prose and rhyme that differentiate us from the masses
we the thousands that have won no accolades
only our peers to love our treasured words,
have signed no contract other than
the blood we've shed through our written word
will each tear, joy, delirium, every ounce of sweat
that has stained our poetry
metaphorically be our fortress in the sky
will we live on in the eyes of those who dare to follow
to tread in our pages as we have those who came before us
“I decided that it was not wisdom that enabled [poets] to write their poetry, but a kind of instinct or inspiration, such as you find in seers and prophets who deliver all their sublime messages without knowing in the least what they mean.” ― Socrates
I think the saddest thing I feel at times are my unread words. Especially here amongst my peers. I just sent an RR out on a poem that has been here since May. Its not a great thing but it has a place in my heart. And its never been reviewed.
Its part of the reason I review as much as I do. Because we poets - we are our words.
Tammy you break my heart, I don't think I have that in my RR's, of course they've run amuck...you're.. read moreTammy you break my heart, I don't think I have that in my RR's, of course they've run amuck...you're brilliant, so sorry you feel that way!
11 Years Ago
RRs multiply when you aren't looking. Like watered mogwai.
11 Years Ago
Oh I know, I can't keep up....send it to me in a PM, I looked and couldn't find it on your page.
I loved this,Its funny after reading about how I had this thought the other night if every died and all were left were poets would we all get along. Lol I know one may never know that answer ,But one thing I find in us poets is we can relate to each others breeze.
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11 Years Ago
On a level non-poets cannot, so right, thanks Jon.
This is a really insightful reflection on the nature of poetry - or maybe what may come from it..Anyone with a brain can speak but very few can speak well. You can though!
I'm not sure if the fame matters.. living on.. though I'd love some followers - deserved or undeserved! I expect that poetry is its own reward to the poet - as a sort of therapy and self-expression. There may be an art to being memorable and to gaining a following. I'm not sure what it is - authenticity and luck maybe.
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11 Years Ago
Wow Robert, thanks so much for your visit and review, appreciate that you stopped by.
I feel this; it's like an old song long ignored but sounds sweeter upon every recall. An old favorite abandoned for a newly found preference, yet the chance taste of the old makes bitter the new.
A heart of a poet I saw through this, but the mirror from your poetry scorns me; a scorn I gladly receive.
Regardless who am I to say anything about this piece. It is brilliant!
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11 Years Ago
Thank you for your visit and review Juan, much appreciated.
A poet sees beauty where others see darkness..a poet finds magic in the ordinary..
an old dusty bookshelf our castles
our pen the sword that exults us... my two favorite lines
A beautiful tribute to poets hoping their words will be read - and felt...
Lovely my friend
:) Julie
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11 Years Ago
Why didn't I think of that, 'a poet finds magic in the ordinary'...! :-) Thanks Julie, glad you enj.. read moreWhy didn't I think of that, 'a poet finds magic in the ordinary'...! :-) Thanks Julie, glad you enjoyed this one my friend....
Let the mad poets say what'er they please
of the sweets of fairies, Paris, Goddesses,
There is not such a treat among them all,
Haunters of caverns, lake and waterfall,
As a real woman, Lineal indeed
From Pyrrha's pebbles or old Adam's seed.
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11 Years Ago
I'm confuzzeled lee, did you write that?
11 Years Ago
No way I found a book filled with things my Grandmother loved ,and some of it fits you.
11 Years Ago
Wow what a grand compliment, you did love your grandmama right?
11 Years Ago
Thanks for sharing that by the way, I love it..........
11 Years Ago
Yep but she would not accept some of my "Lazy" poems. She liked them right.
11 Years Ago
I guess she knew you could do better than 'lazy', whatever that even means....don't think I"ve read .. read moreI guess she knew you could do better than 'lazy', whatever that even means....don't think I"ve read a lazy one from your pen...
MmmmH, I guess she liked ? Calisthenics , she believed the form, body, structure, held the readers .. read moreMmmmH, I guess she liked ? Calisthenics , she believed the form, body, structure, held the readers mind in the writers chosen direction, and if done correctly the intended / emotion would be naturally ?infused. Me now I believe all she said to be true, but I think I can ? Open , float , be a conduit, and let the emotion fill the voids within the reader, the reader pulling from the emotional pallet That has been ?sifted through me.
11 Years Ago
I don't know if Grandma had it all right, as long as it floats your boat, it's good with me, give me.. read moreI don't know if Grandma had it all right, as long as it floats your boat, it's good with me, give me something to sink my teeth into and I'm good to go....I'm less concerned with structure, just feed me some passion from the soul.
11 Years Ago
we will do well reading each other ,so long as you don't mind a few tics on a soul.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..