Beyond Ambiguity

A peaceful communion ~ quote by RUMI is one of my favorites.

Come sit with me in fields of poppies

where collective thoughts can be free

we are capable of peace & tranquility

beyond a tortured existence 

acceptance is the key to deter conflict

stepping further aside good & evil

 the lines of societal ambiguities' affronts

Herein lies a gracious communal of harmony

Hear the doves coo, where music plays in the heart,

                        we'll dance in these fields together...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Come sit with me in fields of poppies
where collective thoughts can be free"
A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the above lines. It is good to know peace and harmony. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Jazzed you enjoyed this one John, thanks so much for your kind review.

[Ken Simm.]

A sylvan dream Frieda. A scene worthy of your words.

[Frieda P]

Gracie mille Ken....

[Jack...]

Funny I sit here, looking out of my window at a beautiful rising sun, and I think, where is this heaven? It could be waiting right there but it is not. Your words bring to mind a peaceful setting of wonderful flowers and empty worries, so I may sit within your words for a while, as here, within your words, your world, is the only place I find this solitude exists at the moment. I will find solitude and it will bring me peace and it will make me smile and I will recite your words as I dream. Very beautiful my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

What a perfectly esquiste review Jack....glad it brought you some solace my friend.

[Abhra]

I liked your usage of the field of poppies. Right from the first line this poem feels welcoming and hopeful.
good work!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your visit & review Abhra, much appreciated.

[Traci]

Lovely piece Frieda. We all need a place like this where "peace and tranquility" overcome "tortured existence" and harmony is found. Well done, my friend.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Traci, I've always loved that quote, glad you enjoyed this one...

[Traci]

Always a pleasure, and one of my favorites!