Beyond Ambiguity

Beyond Ambiguity

A Poem by Frieda P
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A peaceful communion ~ quote by RUMI is one of my favorites.

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Come sit with me in fields of poppies
where collective thoughts can be free
we are capable of peace & tranquility
beyond a tortured existence 
acceptance is the key to deter conflict
stepping further aside good & evil
 the lines of societal ambiguities' affronts
Herein lies a gracious communal of harmony

Hear the doves coo, where music plays in the heart,
                        we'll dance in these fields together...



© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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"Come sit with me in fields of poppies
where collective thoughts can be free"
A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the above lines. It is good to know peace and harmony. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Jazzed you enjoyed this one John, thanks so much for your kind review.



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An awesome poem and quote from one of the mystic greats Rumi. I like how Rumi and you in this poem speak individually but it applies to humanity in general. We have to compromise , meet somewhere where we both or each find love and serenity...A splendid one...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille for your gracious review Sami :-)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Simply beautiful. Who wouldn't want to dance in a field of peace and tranquility. A lovely invitation and a stunning poem and presentation. :) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Julie, glad you enjoyed :-)
NICE PRESENTATION PROSE...Laury

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Laury.
An indeed... I have to say Frieda of all your many splendid poems I've read and reviewed, this one to date has impressed me most, a work of poetic art ! Profound and prophetic in wisdom, it counsels a meaningful message, to step back from the hussle and bussle of daily life with all the worries that brings, find a quiet, serene place to ponder, be accepting of what is and what has been before and enjoy the present!

This is a most wholesome and therapeutic concept, poetically portrayed as ever and I thoroughly endorse and embrace its merit in a most grandiose acceptance !!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wow Tom, I must say I'm truly humbled by your kind words, thanks so much!
Tom

11 Years Ago

I do try to attain a commensurate review to the poem I have just read but I have to concede I have f.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Again, thank you, I'm overjoyed !
true....peace and tranquility speed up the peace process

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks doc, glad you enjoyed...
Tranquil and soft. I like the feel of gentle nudging toward common understanding, common ground. Well done, my friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Sirrah!
a nice thoughtful one...and lines beautifully express the meaning of the poem... pleased to read...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Pleased you enjoyed prachi, thank you.
What a beautiful thought, how nice it would be to escape all the negativity of the world, if only for a short time. A little Garden Of Eden on Earth.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Taz, muchly appreciated...
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Welcome Moonbeam.
Hear the doves coo, where music plays in the heart,
we'll dance in these fields together...

I liked the end lines...of this one...and I liked the font...getting better...you always offer a bit more into your reads music and picture...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha thanks Glen, I think....
Glen Yumang Manese

11 Years Ago

You're welcome...see I remembered this time...of course that was 23 hours ago when I read this one.... read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

So glad I could drag you back my friend....
So beautifully penned Frieda and the music and video ....Wow...Gorgeous...
thank you for posting...Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words Rose....

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