"Come sit with me in fields of poppies
where collective thoughts can be free"
A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the above lines. It is good to know peace and harmony. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Jazzed you enjoyed this one John, thanks so much for your kind review.
An awesome poem and quote from one of the mystic greats Rumi. I like how Rumi and you in this poem speak individually but it applies to humanity in general. We have to compromise , meet somewhere where we both or each find love and serenity...A splendid one...:)
An indeed... I have to say Frieda of all your many splendid poems I've read and reviewed, this one to date has impressed me most, a work of poetic art ! Profound and prophetic in wisdom, it counsels a meaningful message, to step back from the hussle and bussle of daily life with all the worries that brings, find a quiet, serene place to ponder, be accepting of what is and what has been before and enjoy the present!
This is a most wholesome and therapeutic concept, poetically portrayed as ever and I thoroughly endorse and embrace its merit in a most grandiose acceptance !!
Wow Tom, I must say I'm truly humbled by your kind words, thanks so much!
11 Years Ago
I do try to attain a commensurate review to the poem I have just read but I have to concede I have f.. read moreI do try to attain a commensurate review to the poem I have just read but I have to concede I have fallen a distant second place to your commendable poem Frieda !
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..