Beyond Ambiguity

Beyond Ambiguity

A Poem by Frieda P
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A peaceful communion ~ quote by RUMI is one of my favorites.

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Come sit with me in fields of poppies
where collective thoughts can be free
we are capable of peace & tranquility
beyond a tortured existence 
acceptance is the key to deter conflict
stepping further aside good & evil
 the lines of societal ambiguities' affronts
Herein lies a gracious communal of harmony

Hear the doves coo, where music plays in the heart,
                        we'll dance in these fields together...



© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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"Come sit with me in fields of poppies
where collective thoughts can be free"
A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the above lines. It is good to know peace and harmony. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Jazzed you enjoyed this one John, thanks so much for your kind review.



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Dye
The field of poppies...a very peaceful place...easy to forget and just relax. Wait a minute....a big field of opium...very harmonious ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Laughing here, you would go there Dye! ;-)
There is such an awakening here...a feeling of awe, the beauty of the poppies. Your "author's note" kept me mesmerized, and the quote by RUMI...such a tranquil presentation, Frieda!

My best,
Kelly

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thrilled to hear, I was having a Kumbaya moment, glad you enjoyed Kelly!
"acceptance is the key to deter conflict"

if only people remembered that , we might have more love and less hate...

the state of the world is the worst i have seen since my birth.

great poem..a strong message but a gentle way to relay it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

thanks jacob, jazzed you enjoyed this one...
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

love that an adjective "jazzed"

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Me too jacob ;-)
Blissful! Invites me to a deep cleansing sigh...I accept. :) (tho i will not smoke poppies) :)))
E

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha E, leaves more for me, thanks ;-)
A feeling of serenity flows through ever line of this spiritual write, Frieda. Lovely. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Lydie, glad you enjoyed.
This is beautiful. Reading this is a deeply spiritual experience...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wow, thanks Angel, coming from you that means a lot....
You have picked out a favorite thought with this write.
We do not have to label everything do we? Ambiguity is a gift as it allows space to be oneself in the midst of the ever changing values of our surroundings.
I am happy to live in this field with you... I can think of no better place to live...
Thank you for the lovely thought.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your luverly thoughts Scott, if only...
I love the tranquility of this piece... dancing upon the fields of a harmonious communion...
Gorgeously weaved wonder... (sigh).... thank you for taking me there, Sister!~xoxo~

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Awh sis, a sigh, how luverly, thanks muchly my sweet friend! xoxo
This should be tacked to every wall of every world leader, every person who makes decisions about sending people off to war - for that matter, every classroom and playground, too - everywhere there is a need for the wisdom of peace. Beautiful words here, Frieda...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

So kind of you to say Rita, thanks so much....!
Your poem is hauntingly beautiful and incredibly sad, to think we must lie among the dead to know true peace. Quick fact: In Flanders Field was actually written by a Canadian (Yeah we do that, us Canadians. Jim and Mike Myers Canadian. Annoying huh?)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha your review made me laugh, I know some other annoying Canadian's too, won't mention any names Ben.. read more
Pryde Foltz

11 Years Ago

Your welcome.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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