Beyond Ambiguity

Beyond Ambiguity

A Poem by Frieda P
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A peaceful communion ~ quote by RUMI is one of my favorites.

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Come sit with me in fields of poppies
where collective thoughts can be free
we are capable of peace & tranquility
beyond a tortured existence 
acceptance is the key to deter conflict
stepping further aside good & evil
 the lines of societal ambiguities' affronts
Herein lies a gracious communal of harmony

Hear the doves coo, where music plays in the heart,
                        we'll dance in these fields together...



© 2013 Frieda P


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"Come sit with me in fields of poppies
where collective thoughts can be free"
A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the above lines. It is good to know peace and harmony. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Jazzed you enjoyed this one John, thanks so much for your kind review.



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Heartfelt :) It inspires to clear-up all the ambiguities and move on in life with enthusiasm , love and affection giving up greediness.....great one :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Vani, appreciate the visit and review :-)
The quiet and tranquility of sitting in a filed. Nice. but you know, poppy seeds can make you high!...LOL

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yes, that's what I've been reminded of.....ha, if that's what it takes to get peace, hey....
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LJW
Poppies For Peace. A movement that would have us lying in fields of poppies. I do believe we tried something like that in the 60's. Unfortunately, the pipe was passed but not everyone took a hit.

World peace. How sweet it would be.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks LJW...perhaps we need to pass that peace pipe again.
In the midst of turmoil and strife and grief, i think the whole world is crying out for solace in this quiet field... if only we could silence all the voices crying out for war, and show them. but perhaps the only way is to carry this solace within ourselves, and share it with those we love, and maybe then we will have the strength to weather the chaos together. well-written and deeply insightful. and bonus points for the Rumi quote--I am incredibly fond of those.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your thoughts Siren & most gracious review.
Siren

11 Years Ago

you are most welcome
This was very peace rendering... I was in that field for a second. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

One moment at a time...thanks muchly!
This is lovely Frieda - You have some wonderful images and have worded it really well..... Another fantasti write from you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille noodlebumble....x
Beautiful image... but I can see the west witch gesturing over her crystal ball and muttering 'poppies. .. poppies'

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I give up.....
Mark

11 Years Ago

Let me just take a moment to savor ..... aaahhhh :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahaha smartarse! ;-P
" we are capable of peace & tranquility
beyond a tortured existence " - YES ! We bloody well are Frieda, it has been proven that times of harmony existed in the past - why not now...

Thinking of peace and tranquility gets me so angry - ;)
X

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha ANTnee, take your little pink pills, you'll feel all better ;-) x
ANTO

11 Years Ago

I took the pills 30 minutes ago but took the blue ones by mistake and now the dog is looking very wo.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL! You're bonkers......
I like this, the first line has for a me a great metaphysical feeling, Donne or Marvell maybe, this invitation
to read on..very good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Leslie, glad you enjoyed.
nice, peaceful message :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

grazie mille Leandro. :-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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