~Buttermilk Skies~

I loved you blithely through reverie's eyes

 floating like  elusory feathers through my mind

i crashed into you whilst on a stargazing  cloud 

you took my breath away with billowing vibrancy

locked in my caged illusion,  you sang like an angel

never wanted to peek the darkly light of day,

moonstruck delerium fancied  enchanted music,

dancing upon phantasy of pipe dreams

i breathe heavily of infused ether's essence

with hopes for musings of fool's heaven,

never to drift from this castle in the air

soul's glinting on serendipitous meditations

of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the description. Took me to good places and thoughts.
"never to drift from this castle in the air
soul's glinting on serendipitous meditations
of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds"
I like the use of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks Coyote, I kind of like buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds myself...muchly appreciate your kind words.

[Rita L. Sev]

moonstruck delerium fancied enchanted music,
dancing upon phantasy of pipe dreams...

I get a sense of being intoxicated by this memory, so that everything else fades away... feeling both the sour and the precious, precious sweet... Very nice, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rita, and no hangover. ;-)

[Siren]

thick, delicate, rich..... as fresh as cheesecake. i love it!

[Frieda P]

Hah cheesecake, I like that Siren!

[Siren]

I'm glad! it's a great write, and cheesecake is great food (:

[Dr. Wood ?]

ditto wot Jack sed..only in English

A privilege to read,,, Frieda

[Frieda P]

Ha funny I thought that WAS English...thanks doc...

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Frieda, you have moments where your pen can do no wrong. This is one of them.

[Frieda P]

Wow poetic heroics, thanks so much...

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It's very much deserved.

[Pryde Foltz]

That's the thing about beefcake
-or pie, if that's your preference--
you can look and smell for free
but taste; then comes the penance.

So hungry now. I lovely little daydream here, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Ha now I feel as though I have to go to confession Pryde....

[Pryde Foltz]

Or the kitchen...when in doubt choose chocolate.

[Frieda P]

Dark and you're on.............

[Pryde Foltz]

Dark, milk or white. I'm not picky.

[Frieda P]

In a pinch, milk, never white, it's not even real chocolate....never.

[Pryde Foltz]

I know but just love it. White chocolate with cocoa beans---yum.

[Frieda P]

You were perfect until you said that. ;-)

[Pryde Foltz]

You now know my secret shame.

[Frieda P]

Perfection is highly overrated anywho....

[Angel]

moonstruck delirium fancied enchanted music...
That line is going to stay with me for a very long time.
Beautiful...

[Frieda P]

Nice to hear Angel, thanks muchly...

[Kelly Scheppers]

There is a grace that resonates through this so brilliantly, so beautifully!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Kelly!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I have got to hand it to you... You left me breathless with this one...

"i breathe heavily of infused ether's essence

with hopes for musings of fool's heaven,

never to drift from this castle in the air

soul's glinting on serendipitous meditations

of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds"~ The vision alone is surreal... add "Buttermilk skies" and I'm in dreamland....

Stunning write!~xoxo~:)

[Frieda P]

Wooo, that's saying a lot after all your luverly reads sweet Robbie, jazzed you enjoyed my friend. xox

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy sigh! Frieda, this is simply lovely.....breathtaking imagery of nature's beauty. "ether's essence"...such beauty can sedate....but it can also inspire. Music, magic, and fantasy.....this poem has it all. Just a dreamy delight! Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks so much Lydie, what a sweet review!