~Buttermilk Skies~

~Buttermilk Skies~

A Poem by Frieda P

I loved you blithely through reverie's eyes
 floating like  elusory feathers through my mind
i crashed into you whilst on a stargazing  cloud 
you took my breath away with billowing vibrancy
locked in my caged illusion,  you sang like an angel
never wanted to peek the darkly light of day,
moonstruck delerium fancied  enchanted music,
dancing upon phantasy of pipe dreams
i breathe heavily of infused ether's essence
with hopes for musings of fool's heaven,
never to drift from this castle in the air
soul's glinting on serendipitous meditations
of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds

© 2013 Frieda P


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A beautiful poem. I like the description. Took me to good places and thoughts.
"never to drift from this castle in the air
soul's glinting on serendipitous meditations
of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds"
I like the use of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Oh thanks Coyote, I kind of like buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds myself...muchly appreciate yo.. read more



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The imagery in your poem is stunning... Your words float like the elsory feathers you speak of taking the reader into a dream like place of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds. Stunning, stunning poetry my friend and definitely a new favorite. :) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm thrilled Julie, thanks so much. :-)
You took my breath away with billowing vibrancy...that sounds very much like the effect your words always have on me Mrs.R :) You have a signature style yet every piece has little elements that make them unique, which is the best writing style to have...in this piece, it was the delicacy-inspired metaphors of the title and the end...sing on angel ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wow Benji, another one of your reviews going into my favorites! Thanks so much :-)
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Always a pleasure my dear friend :)
Wow, there is some gorgeous imagery in this poem. You build a magical mood. I suppose this could be about two lovers, but it could also be a metaphor for that which drives your spirit, be it your muse or simply a desire to always embrace what you love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks annie lee, name change I see, funny thing is I thought your name was Lee, weird huh? Always .. read more
A reflective rhapsody of dreamy, blissful days shared with a lover !

And a passionately, poetic account it certainly was Freida !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Always the thought my sweet friend, but it would be 'amica', female, can't always trust google. ;-) .. read more
Tom

11 Years Ago

I concede once more to your superior knowledge & fluency of the Italian language !
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Believe me it's not much, mostly the words drunken sailors utter! haha
The usage of language here...Frieda...each line is riddled in them with words you use to convey this rather effective poem...as a reader this has much to say for 13 lines of poetry...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Glen, jazzed you enjoyed, and no complaints about the font, that's always a plus. ;-).. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

11 Years Ago

You're welcome...I just let this one slide...
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You're funny. ;-)
As Jack`s notes well, a poem full of beauty, like Buttermilk skies too...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thank you Leslie, and I'll have to thank Jack again too...
Sounds like a place I'd like to go at least once in a while!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Think I could live there, thanks Barbara!
A beautiful piece Frieda. The flow was wonderful in this and held a nice even tone all the way through.

Regards
Troy

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Troy.
interesting imagery with nice alliteration, magical movement of words and rhythm here.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much jacob, glad you enjoyed.
i breathe heavily of infused ether's essence
with hopes for musings of fool's heaven,
never to drift from this castle in the air

so dreamy. so creamy :) tasty

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Anand. :-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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