A beautiful poem. I like the description. Took me to good places and thoughts.
"never to drift from this castle in the air
soul's glinting on serendipitous meditations
of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds"
I like the use of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Oh thanks Coyote, I kind of like buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds myself...muchly appreciate yo.. read moreOh thanks Coyote, I kind of like buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds myself...muchly appreciate your kind words.
The imagery in your poem is stunning... Your words float like the elsory feathers you speak of taking the reader into a dream like place of buttermilk skies and apricot diamonds. Stunning, stunning poetry my friend and definitely a new favorite. :) Julie
You took my breath away with billowing vibrancy...that sounds very much like the effect your words always have on me Mrs.R :) You have a signature style yet every piece has little elements that make them unique, which is the best writing style to have...in this piece, it was the delicacy-inspired metaphors of the title and the end...sing on angel ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Wow Benji, another one of your reviews going into my favorites! Thanks so much :-)
Wow, there is some gorgeous imagery in this poem. You build a magical mood. I suppose this could be about two lovers, but it could also be a metaphor for that which drives your spirit, be it your muse or simply a desire to always embrace what you love.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks annie lee, name change I see, funny thing is I thought your name was Lee, weird huh? Always .. read moreThanks annie lee, name change I see, funny thing is I thought your name was Lee, weird huh? Always enjoy your insightful reviews....
A reflective rhapsody of dreamy, blissful days shared with a lover !
And a passionately, poetic account it certainly was Freida !
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Grazie mille Tom!
11 Years Ago
Sei il benvenuto al mio amico ! ...had to google again but it's the thought that counts Frieda I'm s.. read moreSei il benvenuto al mio amico ! ...had to google again but it's the thought that counts Frieda I'm sure you'd agree ?
Always the thought my sweet friend, but it would be 'amica', female, can't always trust google. ;-) .. read moreAlways the thought my sweet friend, but it would be 'amica', female, can't always trust google. ;-) Much appreciated!
11 Years Ago
I concede once more to your superior knowledge & fluency of the Italian language !
11 Years Ago
Believe me it's not much, mostly the words drunken sailors utter! haha
The usage of language here...Frieda...each line is riddled in them with words you use to convey this rather effective poem...as a reader this has much to say for 13 lines of poetry...
Thanks so much Glen, jazzed you enjoyed, and no complaints about the font, that's always a plus. ;-).. read moreThanks so much Glen, jazzed you enjoyed, and no complaints about the font, that's always a plus. ;-)
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..