Anywhere, I want you~

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Yes, luscious meadows are the best of places. I live near many such meadows. Here’s a gift poem which you may keep as your own.

Meadows

Lay me down on luscious meadows
where keen metaphors abound.
Take me from the world’s ghettoes
where concrete defiles the ground.

[Frieda P]

Sorry for the late response Athereal, it's lovely, thank you.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome, Frieda! Being that Fall's in in the air, and holiday season is beginning everyone most likely shall be busy till after New Year's Day. Tax and football season is beginning too.

[Vikrantsingh]

This is really good work Fredia :)
Loved it from line -
Dance to the end of lovers submission
Tip a moonbeam, b'dazzle the stars
Pen fancy flutters of butterfly kisses
Script a stanza of no tomorrow
Linger in interludes of signed fervor
Breathe with passion, exhale joie de vivre poetry
This is too good I Anywhere, I want you.. Smart move ;)
- Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your lovely review my sweet friend. :-)

[Frieda P]

The title is the translation of the lyrics, thanks for reading.

[Jack...]

"Script a stanza of no tomorrow" beautiful Frieda. Who needs tomorrow when we have today. Softly your words float this morning upon my eyes, filling my heart with happiness. Tenderness in your lines invokes a feeling of a spring day, cool breezes and clear skies and beautiful poetry being read aloud while resting in the shade of a large maple tree. Always beautiful, always amazing.

[Frieda P]

Always you humble me with your kind reviews my dear friend, thanks so much Jack.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This speaks to me...the lines just kept me in the whole time...again we are at odds with the font...I would of like the same like the two starting lines:

Lay me down in meadows of luscious metaphors
Sprinkle stardust of diary's vintage'd pages

Lots of action verbs here within this verse...

[Frieda P]

We're never going to agree on the font Glen, I really like this one, it's soft & appeals to me for this kind of poetry, thanks for your review....

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...if that's all we disagree on...I'm fine with that...the writing and intent is what matters...I had to add that in there...though...good day...

[Frieda P]

So I should expect it every time I use that font....ha, and thanks again, muchly appreciate your thoughts here.