Anywhere, I want you~

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Yes, luscious meadows are the best of places. I live near many such meadows. Here’s a gift poem which you may keep as your own.

Meadows

Lay me down on luscious meadows
where keen metaphors abound.
Take me from the world’s ghettoes
where concrete defiles the ground.

[Frieda P]

Sorry for the late response Athereal, it's lovely, thank you.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome, Frieda! Being that Fall's in in the air, and holiday season is beginning everyone most likely shall be busy till after New Year's Day. Tax and football season is beginning too.

[Dye]

So poetically...poetic...Yeah that sounds like a fancy review. :) I love the different descriptions of poetry. Very beautiful like always.

[Frieda P]

Hey it works for me...thanks Dye. :-)

[Rita L. Sev]

A poem romancing the poetry... flows like a waterfall, Frieda.

Stain the skin of sonnets' secrets - great image and alliteration in this!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rita, glad you enjoyed this one!

[Pryde Foltz]

Oh, Frieda
everyday, you amaze
words are your b***h
you lay them just so
to your liking ...
they keep screaming
for more

[Frieda P]

HA, I want that over my desk framed or on a t-shirt now....'words are my b***h' love it Pryde....

[Pryde Foltz]

Smile and a wink.

[Emerald Seas]

It is so romantic in all its form. Writing, the font, form, etc. Lovely...
"Stain the skin of sonnets' secrets" love that line.
The imagery and use of metaphors is well executed, my friend.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your kind review Sirrah....

[David Scott]

I like the title. I could read it several ways... Like you are telling your lover you want them anywhere and anytime. Yet also, I could read this as the author being dominant and saying you will let me have you anywhere I want you...
The poem was like visiting a spa in my mind. I loved the video as well. The music made it perfect.

[Frieda P]

I like your thought process here David, spa sounds luverly...thanks so much.

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This is wonderful, am thrilled, at the movement of the words, sounds, and music.

[Frieda P]

As I am thrilled by your review, thanks muchly Onyia-ota.

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chukwuebuka Benson]

You are always welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

"Dance to the end of lovers submission

Tip a moonbeam, b'dazzle the stars

Pen fancy flutters of butterfly kisses

Script a stanza of no tomorrow"
Amazing soothing and soft poetry at the pinnacle of love and passion done with an excellent quill... Loverly...:)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Sami, jazzed you enjoyed :-)

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are welcome...:)

[Justaguy]

A story of passion, written in the language of writing. Very well done! (And I like the font)...lol

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks, unicorns ain't so bad after all....lol ;-)

[Justaguy]

No, no they are not!...lol

[Horizon K.]

Oh how I would love to lay in such a beautiful field of metaphors... And there is something so incredible about the beautiful words, written by a lover, poems or letters that can be read ever again in thier elegant love speak... Script a stanza of no tomorrow... Perhaps the poetess loves a poet...

[Frieda P]

What I meant to say was give me poetry that affects me and I'll follow you anywhere, thanks Horizon ;-)

[SyberRose]

A lovely poem about poetry and I loved the touch of the purple posies..and also the French reference... exhale joie de vivre...of the enjoyment to life...and exquisite write Frieda...:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Rose, jazzed you enjoyed this one. :-)