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Reviews

[Aethereal]

Yes, luscious meadows are the best of places. I live near many such meadows. Here’s a gift poem which you may keep as your own.

Meadows

Lay me down on luscious meadows
where keen metaphors abound.
Take me from the world’s ghettoes
where concrete defiles the ground.

[Frieda P]

Sorry for the late response Athereal, it's lovely, thank you.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome, Frieda! Being that Fall's in in the air, and holiday season is beginning everyone most likely shall be busy till after New Year's Day. Tax and football season is beginning too.

[Master K-tops]

This is beautiful. I love everything you have written. Every word of every line. Thank you so much for sharing this piece with us.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for reading, glad you stopped by my page...

[Master K-tops]

You are welcome. You can read my writing too. I'm short of reviews. I would be glad if you could.

[TrimarcoRansome]

Genius! A poem abut writing a poem! Lovey words well put together!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your visit & review, glad you enjoyed!

[Joyce S. Greene]

Sounds like a poet's creed, Frieda. Lovely poetry, indeed. You have a flair with your pen that brings your words to life. I enjoyed this very much.

[Frieda P]

Thank you Joyce, jazzed that you enjoyed, you're too kind my friend.

[KeeD]

This is natural beauty like the calmness/peacefulness of laying in the grass to sailing in open waters this resonates in my mind ringing as an uplifting poem. You write with such class and passion, it's hard to find amongst most writers but you do it with such ease.

[Frieda P]

You humble me my sweet friend, thanks muchly Kee.

[Tom]

Oh to be taken to a higher plane on the wings of a metaphorical masterpiece, it was a wonderful, rejuvenating, journey Frieda! Just what I needed and I am indebted once more to your literacy skills!

[Frieda P]

Wow Tom, thanks so much for your gracious review!

[Leslie Philibert]

With quality and style.... we read a fine poem here..

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Leslie...

[Pax]

a poem that speaks much passion...
i tip my hat to you my friend...
expressed in such beauty and grace, I adore this piece...

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Pax, so glad you enjoyed this one....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

god bless america girl...you are amazing when you write your passion poems..

this is great ---"make love to me with your pen"

great metaphor..and really either one could stand for the other...so perfect...

of course i would like the "laying down in meadows of luscious metaphors"

[Frieda P]

You're too kind jacob, thanks, means a lot coming from you...

[Revery]

I think you covered everything!?!? Now lets do it again, lol. and again, haha, and once more. Okay I'll stop now. Great write darling.

[Frieda P]

Haha thanks Revery, cute review.... ;-)

[kublakhan27]

You certainly know the way to a poet's heart Mrs.R...to take all of these literary terms and produce something this sensuous is a talent, and you have it...the sonnet line was amazeballs (to use Kimmer's term) in light of how centuries have been spent trying to decipher them, something I know you don't have the patience to do ;) In other words, this piece strikes me as being all about you...the voices of most of your poems are universal, but there seems to be a whole lot of you in this piece, which is a good thing...this was in my library before I even got to the end...a gorgeous piece from an amazing poet :)

[Frieda P]

Be still my heart! How do you favorite a review, you humble me Steve, took my breath away with this one, thanks so much my sweet friend. :-)

[kublakhan27]

:) Oftentimes my reviews of others come more naturally than my own poetry, especially upon reading you, who I'd like to think I know pretty well ;P It always makes me happy to know I can provide you some light with my words for at least a little while, whether it be reviews or my own work...always a pleasure my dear friend :)