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Reviews

[Aethereal]

Yes, luscious meadows are the best of places. I live near many such meadows. Here’s a gift poem which you may keep as your own.

Meadows

Lay me down on luscious meadows
where keen metaphors abound.
Take me from the world’s ghettoes
where concrete defiles the ground.

[Frieda P]

Sorry for the late response Athereal, it's lovely, thank you.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome, Frieda! Being that Fall's in in the air, and holiday season is beginning everyone most likely shall be busy till after New Year's Day. Tax and football season is beginning too.

[Astro]

"Breathe with passion, exhale joie de vivre poetry" as only AIR can do. I like the poem and video both as they have an ethereal feel that speaks to the heart of the writer/poet.

[TL Boehm]

Lay me down in meadows of luscious metaphors
Sprinkle stardust of diary's vintage'd pages

a poet in love with poetry. That's beautiful. Just beautiful

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Tam, jazzed you enjoyed.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and amazing poetry. Talented people can steal our mind and our thoughts.
"Write a nectar'd love verse
Breeze upon hearts embrace
Stain the skin of sonnets' secrets"
Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks Coyote, muchly appreciated my friend.

[icelandicblue]

Ah poetry, what would we be without it. This is quite lovely Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Grazi mille Anne, lost I'm sure...............

[Tai Ryens]

Rarely do I find poetry that speaks to me dearly with emotions often unfelt, yet I've felt the odd sparkle of an expectation I'm not familiar with. Not even an expectation, more of a...passion. As if you knew what the other would do, yet still had not anticipated the action; almost as if you spoke of the future as the present, but did not know what was to happen...

[Frieda P]

You blew me away with this review Tai, thanks so much my friend.

[ANTO]

There are tip-top poems within poems here - for example -
"Script a stanza of no tomorrow
Linger in interludes of signed fervor
Breathe with passion, exhale joie de vivre poetry" - this is simply breathtaking writing Frieda, could be a poets manifesto in three lines.
X

[Frieda P]

Wow thanks Antonio...............x

[Einstein Noodle]

i love your beautiful mind. be well Frieda and let the poets speak.
E.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly E.............

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, yes, poetry is the ultimate in "joie de vivre" if you ask me. Your metaphors are luscious in this one, Frieda. This was my favorite line, "Tip a moonbeam, b'dazzle the stars " celestial loveliness. Your poetry has a panache all its own and every time I read another one of yours, I am impressed. Excellent. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

That's the extent of my French mon amie....thanks Lydi :-)