~Tango'd Fantasy~

You breathe

delerium into me

knock me

 off balance

disordered 

maddened bliss

trip the musica

 of ardor'd fusion

intensity and verve,

 

dimensionality's

 tango

dance me to insanity

trip my light fandango

dip me to new heights

in your persuasive sensuality

   ~I'm swept away in your vital essence

Author's Note

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

Frieda, this is a sensory explosion....absolutely love it. Thank you for every nuance of this poem....from the architectual shape of the words in the poem to mimic a tango dancer, to the irresistible music of the tango dancing....it just all goes together to say "Wow!" Love it!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, jazz'd you caught on to the shape also, still haven't found anyone who knows how to tango! Muchly appreciate your kind words.

[Blue Ivory]

Woah
Boy have I missed your work!
This poem speaks of passion through dancing and I can feel it spilling through every word you write! And I love your crazy use of words! How ever do you come up with this stuff?

[Warrior Bard]

It would be interesting to read the masculine equivalent of this poem. "Dip me to new heights." Excellent.

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

What a beautiful poem and it is so nice to indulge in your beautiful poesies as always. I am much elated by your lovely talent.Darling ! Your simply awesome
With Much Love & Respect,
Sayed Mudasir

[Astro]

Great description of 'effect' and metaphor Frieda.

[TL Boehm]

dip me to new heights. LOVE THAT.

[ron s king]

How lively is the dance and the tone of your mind. This write is a read which never stops, in that I read it and then read it again to set the pace into my aging mind until I danced along with it. You are a gorgeous writer indeed and, on writing that, I shall go back and dance again to your words!

[Jamie Cook]

STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP!!!! This poem was the bomb bomb! Like seriously. Ohmygawd, I love the mixtures of dance and poems, it just makes me mellow in my seat and go oooooooooooo like cheerios. There was a lovely touch of passion keeping it classy and hot like the tango so I enjoyed so very much! AAAH! SOMEONE SWAY ME AROUND!!!!! I LOVE TANGO! Awesome job woot woot! :D

[Frieda P]

Ha Jamie, you made my morning you crazy kid, no, my entire day! Thanks sweetie! :-)

[Jamie Cook]

D'aaaaaaaw I'm glad I did. I feel awesome now! :D

[Frieda P]

You ARE luverly awesomesauce, don't ever forget it ;-) Woo, featured review too....!

[Jamie Cook]

^-^ I just burped the ABC's that's how motivated I felt from that! Thanks Miss Frieda ^^ WOOT WOOT!!!!

[Frieda P]

HAHAHA now you just made me spit my coffee out, what a review! ;-)

[Jamie Cook]

Oops....eheheh (^^') Welcome Miss! :D

[Tai Ryens]

I sense a slight disconnection with reality, trusting someone else with our actions and watching them abuse the trust; hence the inhaling of delirium and dancing to insanity...

[Frieda P]

You mean you don't dance to insanity Tai?

[Lydia Shutter]

It is said dancing is a vertical representation of a horizontal act and you have emphasized that with your sensual write. Such passion in every line and the Spanish music to accompany your words was a splendid choice. I enjoyed this. lydi**

[Frieda P]

Yes I remember that line, wasn't in a movie, can't recall the name right now, thanks Lydie.