~Lavender Musings~

~Lavender Musings~

A Poem by Frieda P
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Photo~Lavender Field France

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Fly me to another dimension
soar me to new heights 
breathing life from celestial vaults
out of touch with worldly endeavors
my body aching for violaceous fire
spirit desires a starry playground 
take me from this atmosphere
to where skies and fantasy hold hands
spit me out into the universe's garden 
swirling whirls of azure'd downy druthers
my head in the clouds, at least in this moment
daydreaming's reality when you touch cosmos dust
lay me down in fields of lavender for that
 final rush
grand landing of splendorous splashes in vibrant heliotrope
















© 2013 Frieda P


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So many beautiful word combos, here.

violaceous fire
azure'd downy druthers

Finishing off with ...

lay me down in fields of lavender for that final rush
grand landing of splendorous splashes in vibrant heliotrope

Quite the trip you took the reader on today. I LIKED.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Pryde, sorry for the late reply, muchly appreciated.
Pryde Foltz

11 Years Ago

What? Who is this? LOl.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I got stuck in helioptropic fields lol



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Dye
My goodness lady.....sounds like a dream world with filled amazing colors and picturesque scenery in a place far, far away. Although I feel like you could make anything sound beautiful with your style of writing. Seriously, I would love to see your description of something like french fries..... LOL I guess I mean you make everything sound amazing. Ignore me. I'm tired and now hungry :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Laffing my arse off here... ;-) You're a riot Dye, thanks for the glowing review and the smile too... read more
Dye

11 Years Ago

LMAO... I needed that. :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha so did I! ;-)
I'm feeling quite ethereal at the moment, Frieda...this is gorgeous! ...and THAT photo is picturesque! I was shopping saturday, and came across SOS pads...they are now available in a lavender scent! Who knew this, and did not tell me? Lol, it was the reference that threw me off, sorry...

I do believe you do this genre well. It's going in my library, my dear!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

How lovely of you to say Kelly, I was captivated by the photograph which prompted this one, not to m.. read more
Lavender is grand isn't it? This is a totally breathless piece that comes to rest in the perfect place:

lay me down in fields of lavender for that final rush

That is beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Conjures up all sorts of lovely thoughts' yes, thanks so much Anne.
I read your words, closed my eyes, and was surrounded by all manner of violet, and smelling lavender... Gorgeous picture you have painted here, Frieda. LOVE the word violaceous - very cool word choice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I love it when someone can feel the poetry, but smell, wow, thanks Rita, you made my night! :-)
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I could smell the lavender - my head in the clouds at least for this moment (great line!) Thank you for sharing this lovely dream - light as a cloud, pretty as fields of lavender. :) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your lovely review Julie :-)
This was very cool ur poem painted a Beautiful picture dear frieda great work:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks very much, glad you enjoyed. :-)
koty bell

11 Years Ago

Did indeed great write:i
You took my breath away on this one. Just lovely

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wow thanks Tarry....
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

My pleasure
If only this daydream were falling from the skies upon me. My breath escapes me as I soar above this wonderful enchanted land that is flowing vivdly from your mind and your delicate fingers. Frieda, as if love were drawings, pencil sketches on the heart of two as one, your words breach me, fill me and drive me to dreams never before encountered.

Amazing my sweet friend, for this has me swooning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wooo Jack, turnabout is fair play, it's about time I got you to swoon...ha, thanks so much my dear f.. read more
I read that, but I think I need to again. I think it is way above my head...lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Justaguy

11 Years Ago

Oh...the pain!...lol. But sometimes, you girls like that we CAN find it...LOL
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Blahblahblahblah.....................
Justaguy

11 Years Ago

LMAO! I resemble that remark...lol

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