~Lavender Musings~

~Lavender Musings~

A Poem by Frieda P
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Photo~Lavender Field France

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Fly me to another dimension
soar me to new heights 
breathing life from celestial vaults
out of touch with worldly endeavors
my body aching for violaceous fire
spirit desires a starry playground 
take me from this atmosphere
to where skies and fantasy hold hands
spit me out into the universe's garden 
swirling whirls of azure'd downy druthers
my head in the clouds, at least in this moment
daydreaming's reality when you touch cosmos dust
lay me down in fields of lavender for that
 final rush
grand landing of splendorous splashes in vibrant heliotrope
















© 2013 Frieda P


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So many beautiful word combos, here.

violaceous fire
azure'd downy druthers

Finishing off with ...

lay me down in fields of lavender for that final rush
grand landing of splendorous splashes in vibrant heliotrope

Quite the trip you took the reader on today. I LIKED.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Pryde, sorry for the late reply, muchly appreciated.
Pryde Foltz

11 Years Ago

What? Who is this? LOl.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I got stuck in helioptropic fields lol



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The longing and description coalesce into a world we would all love to visit I think. I wish many visits for you my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

If only, now all I need to do is get up the courage to fly. ;-)
The elated feeling from being in love with somebody quite feels like a bath of colors and a an ascendance to the heavens; as you put it. I liked this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Tai, I love reading your reviews...
You know, sometimes you send me to a dictionary too Mrs.R ;P Many of these lines are just golden, and there are too many of them for me to cite here...everything about this piece is dreamy...there's something about dreams and space that just go together, the stars I suppose haha But there is much more than that to this piece...where sky and fantasy hold hands...that line just gripped me from the start, and I haven't even touched on the romantic element yet haha This is a whimsical, soulful, and yes, romantic journey you've taken us on...fly me to the moon ;) xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha fly me to the moon too Benji, thanks, love your review my sweet friend. :-) xo
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha better yet, let's swim to the moon, let's climb through the tide ;) Always a pleasure Mrs.R :) .. read more
Ahhhhhh....such a lovely daydream...
Lovely, my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Angel..............
Wow, you have taken my breath away, luckily I was in hospital. LOL! ;-P This is amazing, Frieda - I adore this write. Your imagery is amazing, and always feels like you write movie after movie, it's simply divine!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hope you have it back now hon, stay out of hospitals will ya nooble? x
s y e

11 Years Ago

Yes boss! x
You paint an even more glorious world with your words than is painted in the graphic you chose to accompany it, Frieda. (But I must say, the graphic, too, blew me away.) You are an artist with your pen and I very much admire your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What an utterly gracious review, thanks so much Joyce...
As rich in emotion as it is in metaphorical colour, an enchanting, irrefusable invitation to cavort hand in hand among the wild flowers !

I'll even give up a days cricket to do that with you Frieda.... and for me that takes some doing !!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

11 Years Ago

Hope you appreciate my sacrifice Frieda P ?
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Are you kidding, I'm knocked on my arse ;-)
Tom

11 Years Ago

Oh dear, hope you landed on the lavender and not the heliotrope?
I read a lot of Frieda`s work, and all of it has quality !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Well thank you very much for that Leslie.....!
"take me from this atmosphere
to where skies and fantasy hold hands"... Wow! Excellent piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

11 Years Ago

Don't I always? ;)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Did you happen to listen to that song last night? ;-)
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

11 Years Ago

Yea, I did... the lyrics were hot and as you warned, the video was a bit weird. More accurately, sup.. read more
So many beautiful word combos, here.

violaceous fire
azure'd downy druthers

Finishing off with ...

lay me down in fields of lavender for that final rush
grand landing of splendorous splashes in vibrant heliotrope

Quite the trip you took the reader on today. I LIKED.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Pryde, sorry for the late reply, muchly appreciated.
Pryde Foltz

11 Years Ago

What? Who is this? LOl.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I got stuck in helioptropic fields lol

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