~Lavender Musings~

~Lavender Musings~

A Poem by Frieda P
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Photo~Lavender Field France

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Fly me to another dimension
soar me to new heights 
breathing life from celestial vaults
out of touch with worldly endeavors
my body aching for violaceous fire
spirit desires a starry playground 
take me from this atmosphere
to where skies and fantasy hold hands
spit me out into the universe's garden 
swirling whirls of azure'd downy druthers
my head in the clouds, at least in this moment
daydreaming's reality when you touch cosmos dust
lay me down in fields of lavender for that
 final rush
grand landing of splendorous splashes in vibrant heliotrope
















© 2013 Frieda P


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So many beautiful word combos, here.

violaceous fire
azure'd downy druthers

Finishing off with ...

lay me down in fields of lavender for that final rush
grand landing of splendorous splashes in vibrant heliotrope

Quite the trip you took the reader on today. I LIKED.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Pryde, sorry for the late reply, muchly appreciated.
Pryde Foltz

11 Years Ago

What? Who is this? LOl.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I got stuck in helioptropic fields lol



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You are amazing, Frieda! You put such depth in your poetry and you always have me wishing I could experience whatever you are writing about... And as usual, that use of vocab you have is tremendous

Posted 10 Years Ago


There's some really interesting and playful language used in this one Frieda. The thought of lying in a field of lavender is beautiful, the picture helps those who perhaps don't know what a field of lavender looks like but it's a violet dream.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Very true, that would really suck especially to end on a Monday. ;-)
Astro

11 Years Ago

Ya but if I was talking to you from the grave, that would be cool. Especially this close to Hallowe.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahah I'll see what I can do you twisted so & so....haha ;-)
to where the skies and fantasy hold hands. love that line.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Tam, glad you enjoyed my lavender musings....
Violet fires and starry playgrounds giving way to "swirling whirls of azure'd downy druthers" The images are extraordinary, Frieda! Vibrant, dreamy, and magical. Magical musings if you ask me. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Lydie, it's the chemicals in joisey, you know how they go to your head ;-)
Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Yea, blame it on Joisey...everyone else does! :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahah I know right? ;-)
That's one heck of a tromping through lavender fields, my friend.

I was momentarily wisked away. Those last two lines are quite the read! Love the journey you took me through this afternoon...

now where are those magic mushrooms so we can do that again? ;) Wonderful write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Laughing here, I thought you had them.............!
Lavender dreams can lead to good places. Good visions create by the amazing poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille John, jazzed you enjoyed my lavender musings.
Gor blimey lol Hon, you envelope my senses, truly! x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh I'm stealing that from you girlie, thanks muchly! :-) x
Ruth

11 Years Ago

lol Cool xxx
Awe man that was like that one dream I had where it was me and my mom and she gave my a bag of doritos...it was FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!! But this was way better, so delicately written and so beautifully composed. Awesome job Miss Frieda! Never has there been a disappointing write nor one that wasn't beautiful :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jamie Cook

11 Years Ago

Pssh no...they were ranch. But still they gave me the urge to run through a patch of lavender flower.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You're high on life hon, I love that! ;-D
Jamie Cook

11 Years Ago

I love that!!!! ^-^ That gives me the tinglies ^^
The mind's eye hold lots of magic especially in Dreamland. I dwell as much as I can maybe too much. Your words has strong imagery more vibrant than the beautiful picture. "Heliotrope" I love that word, sunset came to mind. This is very rich and artful :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

One of my favorites too, thanks muchly Psyce :-)
Well, you flew me to the moon ... and several other places. As a fairly representative old-fart baby boomer, I can say that this one will get you going where you might have only been wishing before. May affect heart rate, blood pressure -- cold showers recommended.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Lol annie lee, hope your ticker is okay.

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