You are amazing, Frieda! You put such depth in your poetry and you always have me wishing I could experience whatever you are writing about... And as usual, that use of vocab you have is tremendous
There's some really interesting and playful language used in this one Frieda. The thought of lying in a field of lavender is beautiful, the picture helps those who perhaps don't know what a field of lavender looks like but it's a violet dream.
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Thanks Astro, wish my mind could escape there more often, jazzed you enjoyed....
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The heck with your mind Frieda, go find one to jump into, the memory will be far more potent for you.. read moreThe heck with your mind Frieda, go find one to jump into, the memory will be far more potent for you to return to.
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I was thinking of taking that balloon ride over the fields in France, but life got in the way......... read moreI was thinking of taking that balloon ride over the fields in France, but life got in the way..........
Very true, that would really suck especially to end on a Monday. ;-)
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Ya but if I was talking to you from the grave, that would be cool. Especially this close to Hallowe.. read moreYa but if I was talking to you from the grave, that would be cool. Especially this close to Halloween, that makes for a great plot foundation for scary stories.
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Hahah I'll see what I can do you twisted so & so....haha ;-)
Violet fires and starry playgrounds giving way to "swirling whirls of azure'd downy druthers" The images are extraordinary, Frieda! Vibrant, dreamy, and magical. Magical musings if you ask me. Lydi**
Awe man that was like that one dream I had where it was me and my mom and she gave my a bag of doritos...it was FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!! But this was way better, so delicately written and so beautifully composed. Awesome job Miss Frieda! Never has there been a disappointing write nor one that wasn't beautiful :D
Pssh no...they were ranch. But still they gave me the urge to run through a patch of lavender flower.. read morePssh no...they were ranch. But still they gave me the urge to run through a patch of lavender flowers! :D
The mind's eye hold lots of magic especially in Dreamland. I dwell as much as I can maybe too much. Your words has strong imagery more vibrant than the beautiful picture. "Heliotrope" I love that word, sunset came to mind. This is very rich and artful :)
Well, you flew me to the moon ... and several other places. As a fairly representative old-fart baby boomer, I can say that this one will get you going where you might have only been wishing before. May affect heart rate, blood pressure -- cold showers recommended.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..