Insidious Lover

you, my insidious temptation

the lover that taunts me

seduces me to acquiescence

my haunting addiction

you, wrap around my senses

absolute cunning & Machiavellian grace

annulled my comprehension

drained my rational mind

took me on your flight of fancy

careless beast of burden

you burn so smoothly, pounce so quickly

knocked my perception off kilter

still, i take you in slowly              methodically

till every inch of you inside me bursts into flames

                                             takes my breath away

 fire lingers  flagrantly brazen

warning my head, warming my loins

I tremble in the delectation of your touch

sigh deeply,              as I plead for surrender

you flip me over again in a rush

my head dizzy from the pleasure

two dirty vodka martinis are more than

                      I can handle as I fade into you

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

Soft music, flickering candles, moon light reflecting in your eyes, satin skin, jasmine fragrance as soft shears dance with the breeze of the evening, a warm bed, hot passion, chocolate martinis, sweet lips tantalizing, temptations engulfs as the night is young... Just got carried away with the poem and the music. Amazing my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

Holy Jack! I like where you took this, now I need a cigarette..............and a cool shower.

[Pryde Foltz]

Another really sexy and passionate write, my friend. This is one the reader reads slowly and then again.

[Frieda P]

Stay as long as you want Pryde, we'll be serving dirty martinis shorty...thanks so much.

[Frieda P]

..or shortly depending on your height.

[Pryde Foltz]

Vodka or gin?
Shaken or stirred?
I'm a gin girl myself
--Tanqueray or Bombay--
read moreVodka or gin?
Shaken or stirred?
I'm a gin girl myself
--Tanqueray or Bombay--
I won't say no

[kublakhan27]

I'm hot blooded, check it and see...got a fever burnin' inside of me...;P

Good lord, I was grinning before I finished line one ;P I don't suppose you saw my status last night/this morning did you? If you didn't there is a massive chunk of irony in this piece haha But wow, this is the most awake I've been all day...some delightfully devilish wordplay here but it's the incendiary imagery that brought me to attention here...just the thought of every inch bursting into flames...whew...I'd say you're better off sticking to one martini from now on, but if this is what materializes from two? Have at it my love...thanks for the, um, heads-up Mrs.R ;)

[Frieda P]

You don't have to read my mind ;-) haha Benji, I still can't stop laughing here, I was waiting to see what you'd say about this one, and you didn't disappoint 'hot mama'...ha ha Foreigner was perfect, is your temp 103? :-) Still laughing.........& don't mention it.

[kublakhan27]

LOL Well I had no idea the quote would dominate my sentiments so soundly, but it's perfect isn't it? ;) Probably not 103 right now but it's a very reachable number if you continue to churn out these little ditties...so did you notice my quoting of Beast Of Burden in my status last night? If not, then the collective unconscious strikes again ;P Always happy to make you laugh my dear :) xo

[Frieda P]

Ha no, but I did think of Cohen when I wrote that line...haha too funny, or scary, I'm not sure exactly ;-) x

[kublakhan27]

Haha if I've become associated with Cohen in your subconscious, I take it as a compliment, a big one ;) xo

[Lydia Shutter]

We always want the bad boys and with each sip of a dirty vodka martini, they seem more desirable. The passion, desire, and seduction in every nuance of this one tantalizes, Frieda. Exceptionally well written. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Thanks Lydie, jazzed you enjoyed this one...love 'tantalizes' by the way.

[Aethereal]

An insidious lover is a daring rogue and pirate, but his company is far better than an insipid person who follows the status quo's book of cold-fish recipes and rules.

[Frieda P]

...'cold fish and rules', like how you put that, so true, and if that pirate looks like Johnny Depp I'm all in, thanks so much Athereal.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome!

[Anand Sehgal]

poem, theme, music. It has been a total effort. brilliant :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Anand, glad you enjoyed it.. :-)

[Revery]

Whoa, hot hot hot, nice Frieda. loved it, maybe a little too much.

Looked up insidious: working or spreading harmfully in a subtle or stealthy manner: intended to entrap.

[Frieda P]

The poem was too much or you loved it too much?... Lol Either way, thanks Revery....

[MsJewel]

Soft and sensual, yet written with elegance and class. This is lovely...and the music you added increases the mood so well. Stunning poetry my friend. :) Julie

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Julie, glad you enjoyed this one. :-)

[Vikrantsingh]

Well this is really magic! Loved the way you designed it with your words and work :)
Freida this one is really seducing with this video :P
I loved it :) excellent work once again :)
- Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Woo 'seducing' that's a great review my friend, can I favorite a review? ;-) Grazie mille.....

[redflutterby]

Could this be about a real lover...poetry or perhaps alcohol?? All three are insidious in their ability to enthrall and drive us out of our right minds. But we love them all...returning again and again to feel the heat of their delicious distraction. Speaking of heat...I just clicked on the ac...whoooo...getting quite steamy in here. Time for a shower and then maybe a reread!! Lol.... You do this so well...xoxo

[Frieda P]

I just write em Red, whatever your little heart desires, you can take it there. Lol ;-) I meant thanks muchly my sweet friend xoxo

[redflutterby]

Lol....remember gingers have no souls and their hearts are dark and wicked places!!! ;-pp

read moreLol....remember gingers have no souls and their hearts are dark and wicked places!!! ;-pp

You're welcome my fiesty friend...xoxoxox

[Frieda P]

So evidently I don't want to know where you took it. Lol....ha write it in a poem and let me guess ;-P

[redflutterby]

Haahaahaaa... ;-px

[gabrielle]

your words are pure temptation frieda. it made me delirious once again. =) hah! that lover is truly insidious.

[Frieda P]

Ha I like delirious, sounds good to me ;-) I was going to leave that last line off and keep everyone guessing..........thanks gabrielle