Insidious Lover

Insidious Lover

A Poem by Frieda P

you, my insidious temptation
the lover that taunts me
seduces me to acquiescence
my haunting addiction
you, wrap around my senses
absolute cunning & Machiavellian grace
annulled my comprehension
drained my rational mind
took me on your flight of fancy
careless beast of burden
you burn so smoothly, pounce so quickly
knocked my perception off kilter
stilli take you in slowly              methodically
till every inch of you inside me bursts into flames
                                             takes my breath away
 fire lingers  flagrantly brazen
warning my head, warming my loins
I tremble in the delectation of your touch
sigh deeply,              as I plead for surrender
you flip me over again in a rush
my head dizzy from the pleasure

two dirty vodka martinis are more than
                      I can handle as I fade into you

© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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Soft music, flickering candles, moon light reflecting in your eyes, satin skin, jasmine fragrance as soft shears dance with the breeze of the evening, a warm bed, hot passion, chocolate martinis, sweet lips tantalizing, temptations engulfs as the night is young... Just got carried away with the poem and the music. Amazing my sweet friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Holy Jack! I like where you took this, now I need a cigarette..............and a cool shower.



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the font change with seduces me is brillant ; puts the idea or event in the forefront, a shout, a cry, like too the two lines with the spaced phrase ; very good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Leslie, I was hoping that would work, much appreciate your input...
I will refer this to my boyfriend. This is a treat.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha, let me know how that goes. ;-)
I think I need a drink after reading this... Quite a seductive journey here, Frieda. Love the faded letters in the last lines. :

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Cheers Rita, thanks so much :-)
I'm feeling the effects of Jack's comment all the way up here!

Lol, wow...now that's poetry! You must write in this genre more often, Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha Kelly, heat rises ya know. ;-) Thanks so much, really jazzed you liked this one.....
Wow, Frieda... that did something to me! Can't say what, exactly. lol But, that was an intense trip!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hah, well whatever it was I'm glad it was effective, thanks! ;-)
My its getting hot up in here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Check this out. My phone can suddenly speak Spanish. De hecho la prueba de que se puede hacer en tu .. read more
what the? We need to get this girl more vodka "keep her tanked" it appears this is when she writes best!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha what a great review 'what the?'....thanks Muse!
Pure unadulterated passion reads like something from a Jackie Collins Novel...move over Jackie.. Fp is in the house... :O)

Loving the title Fp & the music makes this erotic piece come alive... :O)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Woo, Jackie Collins she's tough, thanks YB...jazzed you enjoyed. :-)
Yellow Butterfly

11 Years Ago

Loved it Fp... :O)
Clever piece, bad boy, drugs, alchohol or other? What ever it is, sound like you need to stay away from it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

So true, but you know how that goes...thanks Keith.
i like the spacing, it allows us to sigh a little longer...to take this poem in just a bit more slowly....and savor every word.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks jacob, was hoping that would work, wasn't sure about that and the last line, whether to leave.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

you could have left the last two lines off...but the faded ink effect does work pretty well...
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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks again jacob, appreciate your input...

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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