Insidious Lover

you, my insidious temptation

the lover that taunts me

seduces me to acquiescence

my haunting addiction

you, wrap around my senses

absolute cunning & Machiavellian grace

annulled my comprehension

drained my rational mind

took me on your flight of fancy

careless beast of burden

you burn so smoothly, pounce so quickly

knocked my perception off kilter

still, i take you in slowly              methodically

till every inch of you inside me bursts into flames

                                             takes my breath away

 fire lingers  flagrantly brazen

warning my head, warming my loins

I tremble in the delectation of your touch

sigh deeply,              as I plead for surrender

you flip me over again in a rush

my head dizzy from the pleasure

two dirty vodka martinis are more than

                      I can handle as I fade into you

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

Soft music, flickering candles, moon light reflecting in your eyes, satin skin, jasmine fragrance as soft shears dance with the breeze of the evening, a warm bed, hot passion, chocolate martinis, sweet lips tantalizing, temptations engulfs as the night is young... Just got carried away with the poem and the music. Amazing my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

Holy Jack! I like where you took this, now I need a cigarette..............and a cool shower.

[Archangel Gabriel]

The power of alcohol eloquently expressed my Lady. You are a wordsmith indeed.

[lee von cleef]

For weeks I'd been driving past to and from a field of sunflowers. The truck view up high so the field beyond the bar ditch is clear. Rows ,a little weedy but now the flowers are bright,I mentally work my mind around the rings of peddles, never settling on any one too long but they sure hold my interest. then one day in the field, by the road ,beyond the fence, a Fawn spots bright, exposed, neck stretched out in the ray of light eating the peddles. Now a month has past. the field is dark ,the flowers winter dull,weeds gone wire clear,But my mind holds the picture of fawn crisp as your poem is hot.

[Astro]

I really love this naughty secret, that stings the tongue as I wash it down with a deep breath of satisfaction. The addition of Playground Love was just what I needed to loosen up to your penned pleasures Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Astro, love this music, glad you approved my friend. ;-)

[TL Boehm]

ermagerd.
I know I have to write more than that or the crawlers will red script me - but DAMN.
This is steamy stuff, Frieda. Bravo.

[Frieda P]

Ha your lisped review is muchly appreciated.... thanks Tam.

[ANTO]

When I got to the line 'fire lingers flagrantly brazen' I stumbled and then I thought Whoops are these words too tongue-twistery - is that why I stumbled ? Then it dawned on me that the delayed reaction to the previous verse was having a weird effect on me. Not many works have done that Frieda...
Bravo!
X

[Frieda P]

Always love it when I can trip you up Anthonio, thanks muchly! x

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Lots of mental seductive words picture. Yours words snaps a lot.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Onyia-ota, muchly appreciated...

[Tai Ryens]

What a wondrous, ecstatic world you've drawn the reader into; crafted of martinis and rum is the moment your character is trapped in. I particularly liked how you staged this how an alcoholic one-night stand goes most times: worry-free pleasure that fades into memory as the alcohol disperses and its effects fade.

[Frieda P]

Always a pleasure reading your reviews Tai, you take me somewhere new in my own poetry...

[William J. Marsh]

m mm m! wow, you really know how to put a reader into the wonderful world of your words. Your words here spoke to the feelings that I as a man hopes to give in a moment as that.

[Frieda P]

After reading your poetry, I think you're on the right track Bill, thanks so much for your kind words, muchly appreciated.

[David Scott]

Now we are talkin! I like the flipping over. You know I never get enough... Ha.
Can I say I loved every line? Sexy, naughty, passionate, and flat out bangin!
Hot nights to end the summer baby. ;)

[Frieda P]

Your review made me smile, jazzed you enjoyed yourself, and you would pick out that line, thanks muchly! ;-)

[Justaguy]

That was incredible! Insanely erotic and at the same time, beautiful in visual effect. Thank you for sharing that!

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille, I'm thrilled you liked this one....!