Poetic Breaths

~insatiable poetry

I breathe in this moment like a fickle lover

 to grasp you within my lungs

savoring every breathless last word

  filling with the very essence of your song

it stings like a bee on wildflowers in springtime

   as a drug  so deliciously potent, 

I can't get enough to quench the desire

  it floats within my heart on butterfly wings

ink drips upon the page like an ambrosial

 zephyr's

   sweet kisses upon my eyes and soul's embrace

gently soaring on memories of darkly posies

       this dance of poetry is sublime elation

 personified

Author's Note

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

You may breathe in air but you most definitely breath out poetry and fills the air for the rest of us to inhale. I found these lines to be sigh worthy:

ink drips upon the page like an ambrosial
zephyr's
sweet kisses upon my eyes and soul's embrace
gently soaring on memories of darkly posies

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Anne, sigh worthy is an outstanding review...muchly appreciated my friend.

[TL Boehm]

This dance of poetry is sublime elation personified. I love that line.

[Frieda P]

Jazzed you did Tam, thanks so much...

[Justaguy]

A tale of longing and desire, as I read it. And yeah, I can see the sigh....

[Frieda P]

Nice to know, thanks so much. :-)

[Shivam Murari]

The poem is so good and so is the music and voice of the singer, even though I don't get what she is singing :P :)

[Frieda P]

I don't think you have to understand her, she exudes the feelings through her music, thanks Shivam...

[Shivam Murari]

Indeed true :)

[Frieda P]

:-)....................

[Leslie Philibert]

what I like is the breathlessness, just one comma makes this the tumble of words of a young lover...
excellent.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Leslie, you humble me with your kind review.

[kublakhan27]

This dance of poetry is sublime elation personified...you can say that again love...if I ever heard you speak this piece I think I'd faint...it's like a love letter to poetry personified, or an invitation to dance ;) There isn't much left for me to say that hasn't already been said I suppose...there's something organic about your writing, but I'm still shaking off the night's cobwebs so I can't really explain it, but you get the picture...I love this piece, that's what it all comes down to :)

[Frieda P]

Organic, I like that Benji, it's a first, I might have to read it aloud just to see you pass out. Thanks so much, not bad for just opening your hungover baby blues by the way ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure Mrs.R ;) I wish they were baby blues haha...you know you'd have to catch me if I pass out though...I'd like to think you won't let me fall on my face, I've already had enough falling on my face for the summer ;P x

[Frieda P]

Hahah and the scars to prove it too....I won't let you fall, well, maybe...nah just kidding hon ;-) x

[kublakhan27]

Haha well the scars are finally dissipating, but that doesn't mean I want more haha...I know you wouldn't let me fall love ;) xo

[Vikrantsingh]

Whew! and Wow this was the best and really amazing read Fredia :)
I was stunned and you just kept my speechless. Well I was really happy to read this one :)

Lines which I loved
ink drips upon the page like an ambrosial zephyr's
sweet kisses upon my eyes and soul's embrace

Simply amazing and mesmerizing as usual :)
Forte is special and unique :)
- Cheers!
- Singh :)

[Frieda P]

Wow, you humble me Singh, thanks so much for your kind words my dear friend.
Je T'aime Shhhh, don't tell the wifey ;-)

[Vikrantsingh]

i won't thats secret :P ;) isn't it :D

[s y e]

Whew, wow! I loved the music, it was a perfect fit to the write. It gave me goose bumps. Again, the wording is excellent as always and the picture you paint, just... wow!

[Frieda P]

Love this music, she gives me goosebumps every time I listen to her, thanks noodlebumble for your gracious review!

[s y e]

Just the best for you, Frifri! I bought Crazy by Dax Johnson thanks to you. ;-) Another random fact for you.

[Frieda P]

Oh he's so great, that's one of my favorites of his, wish he were still around, I didn't discover him until he was gone...brilliant artist!

[s y e]

He is great, I bought it two weeks ago and on my Itunes it says I've listened to it over 200 times already! He is amazing, his voice......

[Frieda P]

Did you know he plays two pianos at once in some of his composed pieces...amazing yep.

[s y e]

Wow, really? That's amazing, he is definitely amazing. One of my favourites ever, all thanks to you.

[Keith]

Ah yes, some poems just take us to another place, can't get enough of them.

[Frieda P]

Exactly Keith, thanks so much....

[Barbara Walker]

Especially liked the first four lines.!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Barbara, glad you enjoyed this one....!