Secret Unlocked

Random catechism...beyond reality.

...the sleep that takes breath away,

 total blackness of night

Unwinding,

 like the frayed edges

                      of old testament books

 

When that door opens

& the secret unlocked~

Is there truly blissful light

beyond reality's veracity

,

                  wildflowers & poetry too?

Author's Note

captcha~deism

Reviews

[Jack...]

Why not step through and find out? Walk through the wildflowers and read the poetry that is waiting for you just outside of that door, just over that threshold...beyond the white picket gate butterflies sing.

Very nice Frieda. Short but beautiful. Almost a child-like feel to it. This asks an important question to which I believe the answer is yes.

[Sami Khalil]

Imagination at its best , poetry at its best secret unlocked. Thank you for sharing splendor...:)

[Lucy]

Great work Frieda. Loved the flow and wording.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i hope there is poetry there...wouldn't be much of a heaven if that were left behind...

you are a master of the short pieces that pack a wallop.

jacob

[Rita L. Sev]

I like this catechism better than the one I learned in school... Yes, wildflowers, poetry... and chocolate, of course. You have painted Paradise, Frieda, beautifully...

That captcha is interesting... trying to tell you something, maybe? ;)

[redflutterby]

Hmmm...I'm seeing something deeper then sleep here. Death maybe...and what is beyond that? None of us can be sure hun but wildflowers and poetry is a nice thought. I hope whatever it is it is far better then what we go through here. xo

[icelandicblue]

To walk through that door, to be free...ah to sleep per chance to dream. When life is chaotic it's even more important.

[InsanityWriter]

An absolutely lovely flow of imagination Frieda. :) Well done. (;