Secret Unlocked

Random catechism...beyond reality.

...the sleep that takes breath away,

 total blackness of night

Unwinding,

 like the frayed edges

                      of old testament books

 

When that door opens

& the secret unlocked~

Is there truly blissful light

beyond reality's veracity

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                  wildflowers & poetry too?

Author's Note

captcha~deism

Reviews

[ANTO]

Captcha - :) for once...

There will be poetry Frieda and laughing and dancing again.

Loved this piece.
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[J. Kell]

This was beautifully done. I loved the ending the most. I truly hope there is "blissful light
beyond reality's veracity," So well put, I hope so too.

[TL Boehm]

wildflowers and poetry too. I want to live right there in that place. this is such a wistful gentle poem.

[Vikrantsingh]

This is really wonderful work :) I loved these lines
When that door opens
& the secret unlocked~

Smoking hot and great work :)
- Singh :)

[kublakhan27]

One of your more philosophical pieces...I think we all have a poem like this in our minds at some time or another through our lives...I really love the way this unfolds, particularly when the old testament reference is followed by an opening door...there's a stroke of poetic genius in that...of course those strokes can be found throughout your poetry ;) But when the mood and theme of this piece are taken into account, it's a brilliant progression...great stuff as always my dear :)

[Baby Ricochet]

I like the old testament line. Great job frieda.

[Butch Decatoria]

Yes there is always Light

[Pryde Foltz]

Well, my dear, let's hope what awaits waits a good long time. And I am hoping for wine, wildflowers, and poetry. Lovely work, here.

[MsJewel]

Wildflowers and poetry - where would we be without them? This is lovely Freida. :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Wildflowers and poetry.....what a 60's like thought that is and a serene one. Not sure if you will celebrate this week, but your mention of the Old Testament is timely. May you have a peaceful and sweet New Year, Frieda. Your poem is soft and lovely. Lydi**