The better to see you with~

You bit into

 the meat of me

spit me out 

   you didn't realize

this leo lioness

 has sharpened claws

thought yourself,

   prettier too                              

as you puffed

  your wide chest

I left a gap

  wide enough

for another

 foolish woman

who follows me

 to actually see

what's behind

  those chops

you lick so

methodically

Author's Note

Fire Lioness Art by Alex Barrera

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"for another

foolish woman

who follows me

to actually see

what's behind

those chops

you lick so

methodically"
I take this as a jab of sorts or a victory sign at someone who thought he, she can hurt you with their claws or as I take it as insults and you proved to them you are the winner at the end for you can be a lioness...A powerful write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Frieda P]

All fairy tales have some truth to them Sami, I bet any number of people have lived this tale. Thanks muchly... ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:)

[koty bell]

That was f*****g awesome!!if i knew how to favorite poems i totalh would

[Frieda P]

Haha glad you enjoyed my tirade :-)

[Dr. Wood ?]

Can't follow Jack's review.........NASTY.............Remind me never to upset you

[Frieda P]

Laughing, I thought you knew that already! ;-) I meant to say thanks doc.....

[Dr. Wood ?]

Thank you to you too

[Jack...]

Devilishly delightful and wickedly wonderful. Definitely this little Red does not like being pushed aside for a new ride. Big bad wolf or not, when they know what to expect, you'll be running from the hood with your tail between your legs. The most you'll end up with in the future is three not so little pigs, if you are lucky.

Very cool my friend. Like a fractured fairytale Frieda style.

[Frieda P]

Laughing out loud here at your review, 'three not so little piggies'! Haha thanks muchly Jack, you just brought a smile to my face, as usual. :-)