The better to see you with~

You bit into

 the meat of me

spit me out 

   you didn't realize

this leo lioness

 has sharpened claws

thought yourself,

   prettier too                              

as you puffed

  your wide chest

I left a gap

  wide enough

for another

 foolish woman

who follows me

 to actually see

what's behind

  those chops

you lick so

methodically

Author's Note

Fire Lioness Art by Alex Barrera

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"for another

foolish woman

who follows me

to actually see

what's behind

those chops

you lick so

methodically"
I take this as a jab of sorts or a victory sign at someone who thought he, she can hurt you with their claws or as I take it as insults and you proved to them you are the winner at the end for you can be a lioness...A powerful write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Frieda P]

All fairy tales have some truth to them Sami, I bet any number of people have lived this tale. Thanks muchly... ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:)

[Astro]

Well take that she said. You do have a fine way of describing a woman scorned Frieda. ;)

[LadySoDivine]

Very nicely written, Frieda. I like the metaphors used here, the woman strong enough to toss away the man who brings her pain. The problem with some men is that they think they can have anyone and do anything with them. Fortunately, they don't realize that all of them will one day encounter their own "lioness" who will show them their place. Excellent poem!

[Mark]

Lions are best served cold? ha. for breakfast maybe.

[Justaguy]

Sounds like thoughts of betrayal, unless I miss my mark. Nice done. And the pic is awesome!

[Vikrantsingh]

Whew! this one is really so what we say "melodramatic" Its like some fairy tale. This is remarkable, I loved it. I can't say i didn't like this one - lol kidding (I need Fredia's review on my poem though)
Jokes apart this is really seductive and picture is great well that beast is doing naughty thing :P
I loved the part which you mentioned wide chest of this beast and she likes it :)
Excellent work Freida :)
- Singh :)

[William J. Marsh]

Test the waters and you will find the true nature of the beast. Pride and arrogance will never win the day. Real lions act and react like this to the tee. Nature often reveals truths that we humans often deny.
A wonderful metaphor can be drawn from this great piece. Thank you for sharing it.

[Pryde Foltz]

Today seems to be the day of the Lion. Pfft. What's a little mangy wolf. Great write really liked the graphic nature of this one.

[Frieda P]

More lions, oh goodie...nah, hey just huff and puff an awful lot, thanks Pryde.

[ANTO]

Hah - as a fellow Leo I can heartedly agree with the whole poem and its warning to non-Leos. ;)

Loved this Freida
XX

[Frieda P]

Wooo, I should have known! You're a prince ;-) xo

[ANTO]

Hey I gotta woooo. Thank you dearly "ROARRRRR" (sorry I can only do tiger) ;P
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[Frieda P]

Hey we Leo's are good at roaring and purring too, all depends on how we're treated right? ;-) xo

[ANTO]

Oh you are 100% there Frieda - big p***y cats but dont prod - well not too hard ... ;P

[Frieda P]

Lol exactly ;-)

[Angel]

Ahh, yes you did!
But...why is Red's mouth censored in the picture??

[Frieda P]

I guess the 'evil jerk' as 'our' Red put it, wanted her censored, you know how that type is, thanks Angel!

[Angel]

Yes...the "evil jerk" would want her censored...but one thing's for sure...nobody is going to censor that lioness!!
Bad doggie should NEVER mess with Big Kitty!!!!

[Frieda P]

Lol...she ain't no p***y that's for sure ;-)