The Way to A Woman's Heart

If you're looking

   for the way to a woman's heart

     you're using the wrong entrance

don't cry a river

        cue the head instead

coo a tender love song~

           the love organ

                   to the shimmy

                         generally,

                             plays between the ears

       

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

Hmmm, why didn't I think of that? Very nice my sweet friend.


If it’s music you want
Then why not just say it
My piano is sitting
Just begging I play it

A tune in my head
Romantic indeed
Scattered with passion
To fill every need

The keys I would tickle
If you would just smile
Melodies bloom
In a passionate style

It is so much easier
Than roses and wine
If I could play music
And you would be mine

[Frieda P]

Woo, I just fainted & swooned simultaneously. ;-) Amazing how fast you can come up with these Jack....!

[Cassie]

This was Jacks response, you are really a poet Jack

[Frieda P]

I know, he's pretty dang amazing...........

[Ken Simm.]

Writing that down Frieda for future reference. You know it still won't make a blind bit of difference to us brick head men, don't you? We do try, some of us. Or is we are trying, very? Excellent work. I like it.

[Frieda P]

Surely you jest Ken, the way you write poetry I think you're on the right track hon....

[Ken Simm.]

Are you supposed to tell me that? I might get ideas above my station. Still made a note of it.

[Frieda P]

I hardly ever do what I'm 'supposed to' Ken.............

[Misillusions]

This is a nice read that doubles as good advice...something that should be included in the handbook men get at birth (you know...that worn, torn outdated pamphlet that's mostly pictures!). Is there a man-page somewhere we could post on?

Thanks so much

[Frieda P]

Hahaha that made me laugh out loud actually, too bad it's not funny....if it had words in it, they wouldn't look at the fookin thing....thanks muchly!

[Misillusions]

LOL!
you're welcome.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Eloquent and lovely :) always a fan of yours. Great write!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Marc.... :-)

[Tom]

I'll have to now put romantic ballads with all my poems about cricket ! ( oh deary me this may not be easy)!!

A so sweet poem Frieda, well penned !

[Frieda P]

This I want to see Tom, ha...thanks!

[Aethereal]

Yes, she must be serenaded with a shimmy song about chocolate: Here's a gift poem which you may keep as your own:

Shimmy Song

Shimmy, shimmy coco puff
Shimmy, shimmy Aw!
Shimmy, shimmy coco puff
sing without a flaw.
Shimmy, shimmy coco puff
then she'll be your doll.

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, love it!! Cocoa puffs now appeal to me....

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! I have boxes of 'em.

[Frieda P]

Was never one for that sweetened stuff but I love it in poetry...!

[Aethereal]

But chocolate is special cuz it’s an aphrodisiac.

[Frieda P]

I adore chocolate, especially dark, but cocoa puffs is not really chocolate hon....

[Cassie]

I absolutely agree with that, the way to a woman's heart is through her ears, very nicely written. I loved it.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Cassie, I knew you'd agree with me... :-)

[Chris]

I remembered the song... his video was a heck of a Victoria's Secret commercial more than anything else. - chuckling here.

Hi Freida. That poem spoke many truths on real levels, but it takes getting to know your other and few seem to have the time to invest in an other anymore.

It was a pretty poem - font, color, nice format.

Take care,
Chris

[Frieda P]

Yes it was, but it's sassy and you can shimmy to it, took this to get you out eh? ;-)
Nice to see you Chris...& thanks muchly...

[Chris]

I'm always about hon, just opted to be quiet for a bit... there's enough "voices" here

[Frieda P]

I'm rather fond of your voice, thanks for peeking in...

[Chris]

awwwwwwww... you are ...nicely biased.

[Angel]

Very good!
Guys, take notes!

[Frieda P]

Ha Angel, you're gonna get me in trouble with the guys now...notice who took heed!

[Angel]

But we were expecting Mr. Romance...weren't we? Just mention the word...

[Frieda P]

I know, he rises to the occasion lol

[Angel]

His heart is swollen with love...

[Dye]

Yes, I suppose that is one way ;) Nothing like sweet, sweet music to win a ladies heart.

[Frieda P]

Doesn't necessarily just mean music, just don't immediately grab for the crotch lol, thanks Dye. ;-)